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12/3/2020 c1 131jojoDO
Back with another one, eh Yuri? It's nice to see you still flexing your KOF interests. And you stay committed to your Athena x Leona x Mai pairing, which I admire hehe!

So... wow. First of all, I'll voice my criticism. I feel like Athena looks REEEEEEEEALLY weak here, for a super-powered Psycho Soldier. I feel like she could have vaporized a single guy with a knife, no problem. So uh... maybe if the guy were more threatening to her? A gun, perhaps? Or a group of people?

But my complaints end there. Cuz LEONA IS MY GURL! She is a bad ass, and she killed to protect whats hers, which I really admire. It was really romantic and chivalrous, like you said... and I've always been a fan of a damsel rewarding her rescuer. Not that I agree with Athena being a damsel, but it is what it is. : D

All in all, a pleasant little romantic oneshot. Nice job Yuri!
12/1/2020 c1 301Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, Li'l Lily~

HOO-RRAH! 1st Review EVAR, Btches~!

Wow~ Oh wow! Oh my goodness! *O* Leo-nya~! Leo-nya~! Wow, oh my goodness! The power of the Orochi kills...but...it also protects. It protects. Sometimes, to save a life, another life must be taken.

Leo-nya made the right choice. She did good. She used her merciless Orochi power to protect and save Athena from a horrible fate. *O* Oh my goodness~

And afterwards...*O* Ohhhh afterwards~ Oh my goodness~ The other half of this story was sooooo sweeeeet~ *W* So, so, so, soooo sweeeet! So sweet! Oh my goodness~ *O*

That second half of the story was absolutely heart-melting. My heart melted. Athena and Leo-nya are so precious and sweet and loving together, oh wow~ (Heart Eyes)

Great work, Yuri-chan~!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

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