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1/10 c9 Larry
You're very good at writing. Do you think maybe Bane could tie up Lia again in the next chapter. It was pretty hot when he did it in the first one.
1/10 c9 Anon
Ok, I love this so much I need more. I love what you did with it!
1/10 c9 4batmanbane
Ha! I didn't think Stryver was into either women or men. He's always struck me as a eunuch. But Talia has the power to change that with her unique skills. I love that she was wearing a gown. And Bane, he is absolutely awful toward Lia, and laughing about it. I wonder if he will behave when Talia arrives!
1/5 c8 Lovethis
Just finally got up to date! You're brilliant! I love gordon's daughter stories and yours is the best one that I have ever read! Write more you beautiful mind you!
1/4 c8 Anon
You're such an amazing writer but I'm begging you please don't make Bane a hero who starts to care for Lia!
1/4 c8 batmanbane
Oh Bane! Such a voyeur! Wanting to know the details of what she and Matt had planned in the tent and for the future.

He's pretty much doing Talia's bidding in this chapter, playing the adversary and revealing that she's for sale.

At the end that he feels lust for her. I hope he will be kind...
1/3 c8 DiamondPink
Dirty, dark and violent with a hint of humanity. Love it!
1/2 c7 batmanbane
Miranda is so surprising, operating as a sex trafficker at a social event. Your depiction of Daggett is spot on. I can totally believe him as another Epstein.

I like how you've given Blake a shady military background, and the pride that Gordon takes in him.
12/29/2020 c6 batmanbane
I love your description of Bane's emotions as being "scorched earth", and "nothing could grow in the soil post nuclear fallout". Very poetic.

I'm wondering how Bane views Lia - as a child or a woman?
12/21/2020 c5 Anon
I feel like gordon would be more concerned about getting the first picture, I think it was very out of character to have him think it was a prank, since he is the overprotective cop dad, so hopefully we see more of that in the next chapters. But keep writing!
12/20/2020 c5 batmanbane
Can we all just pause and imagine Bane stirring from his nap? The prospect is very endearing. Poor baby, having to watch Talia and Bruce go at it in a bathroom stall. I hope he gives Lia something better to eat than donut holes to spite Talia.
12/15/2020 c4 Anon
Lets go I need more chapters!
12/13/2020 c4 batmanbane
I feel guilty as hell for enjoying the outrageous antics of this lowborn brute, whose every instinct is sexual. I love the fact that he took a lot of photos that he wouldn't be showing to Talia.
12/10/2020 c3 Anon
Keep them coming! More chapters!
12/8/2020 c2 anon
Dude please write more! I check back every day and there's never updates please!
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