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12/21/2020 c2 MarBeez
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this short story. Even though you wrote it 8 years ago, I think you should update it lol. They could be in grad school now or living their adult lives. It would be great to see them as a couple dealing with the disfunction of both sides of their families. They could even run their own gym or fitness company now lol. Please please please write more! I love how long and detailed your chapters are.
12/16/2020 c2 3snorkmaiden15
Thank you, for this story!
Sometimes the whole ‘fat camp’ theme can get a bit messy (for me, at least) but you did it really well in my opinion. I enjoyed it:)
11/30/2020 c1 Simran Kaur
Really good read, I think you really captured emotions of the characters especially in regards to how parents and others treat overweight kids. It’s also quite a unique concept that in comparison to majority of other stories which I really like. Can’t wait to read chapter 2 :) Thank you for writing this story.
11/30/2020 c2 misslalaaax3
Please tell me this is not the end?! Love this chapter. I think it works be fun to see where this goes.
11/29/2020 c2 simone
I like it
11/27/2020 c1 Mimi
So different of what I read. I like it
11/26/2020 c1 MarBeez
Wow this was a very interesting plot for the typical troy/gabi story. But I became very engaged quickly! It was very well written! Very realistic. I felt like I was watching a reality show lol. I love the gradual, yet quick (because they're at camp) friendship/relationship between Troy and Gabriella. I can't wait to read the second part!
11/26/2020 c1 misslalaaax3
Love it! Can't wait until the next chapter is out!

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