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12/6/2020 c2 176Pikatwig
Pretty clever that you guys included a Rider based on The Next after how it was said by the suit company that including it was "impossible". Nice work there.

I do love the equivalent that Tsuki got to Sougo's new form. Though, just a comment, you said that it was "Majo Tsukuyomi" in the previous half, but now it's "Joma Tsukuyomi". ...which is it? Just figured I would ask.

It was nice to see Aruto and co here. Though, now I'm wondering if it was the main version of their world or an alternate one. Kind of hard to tell.

And now... to close off with something funny. I was talking to one of my friends about this story and he pointed it out to me the title was meant to be a pun of Romeo and Juliet. I honestly didn't realize that the title was a pun on that. I recognized the nod to the play in the previous chapter, but I didn't realize that the title was meant to be a pun on that. And I also thought there would be forms with those names. Ah well.

Well, we're reaching the end game, friends. Let's see where the main story goes.

Also, as an aside, thank you for encouraging me to give P.A.R.T.Y. a listen. I hadn't done so before and I love it!
12/6/2020 c1 1merendinoemiliano
Good work and good holidays
12/6/2020 c2 merendinoemiliano
Nice crossover Au, curious to see next events
12/5/2020 c2 3ChaosSonic1
While I am disappointed that we won’t see Zi-O Oma form and Tsyukiomi Ojha form in the Zi-O revised fic it is still enjoyable also love that we finally see Ichigo armor now if only we see the Showa riders armor some time
12/5/2020 c2 Zero Shadow-01
Never get on a Kamen Riders bad side or else your history! But that ending was to “die” for! Hai! Aruto Ja... Naito!
12/5/2020 c2 KRNexus
ah, a very nice ending to the movie. and those Zero one puns were on point, the perfect amount of dreadful.
12/5/2020 c2 5Neo-Arsene
My god oh my god ... it was amazing story! It more improve than Over Quartzer Movie also I love the tease for Zero One Series... I was heck of a ride! !
12/5/2020 c2 56Magic Detective
Great story! I wonder how Zero One will factor with this new gem now? Can’t wait!
12/5/2020 c2 12Toa Solaric
Oh I see, this is truly an interesting AU version of Over the Quartzer and I'm glad that there is no tragedy with Sougo and Alphina here if this is Romeo and Juliet.

I have this question for your Zero-One Bodyguards, why did Thouser have Raiden's Progrise Key? Wasn't it supposed to be with Hiden Corp like in the canon?
12/5/2020 c2 5Spidey Viewer
Well, this was quite a ride.
Ngl, from those Hyper Battles, I expected the movie to take place in the main universe, and was kinda disappointed by it being an AU, and while I still am disappointed, you did quite well with this new setting.
I'll admit, I did find some things (like Sougo and Alpina being contacted out of nowhere by Oma and Tsukuyomi) contrived, but that didn't detract that much.
I love how you gave Tsukuyomi an equivalent of Ohma form. From the description, it's really well designed. I look forward to the rest of the main story and your 01 rewrite (assuming that's the very next Rider rewrite on the list.)
12/5/2020 c2 Dragon Rider 66
Hmm, yeah I guess I didn't really pay too much attention to that. Honestly the first thing that came to my head while reading that was that your canon Zi-O gang was going to somehow find themselves on a wacky adventure in this timeline and meet/work with their counterparts and stuff.

Anyway, this was certainly an interesting way of doing the movie here instead. Nice use of Woz actually being something of a spy for Sougo's "uncle" here (which can sort of be that worlds versions of the Quartzers in a way) along with being the one who saved Geiz when he "died." Although poor Wol in the end with how he died, but at least he was given his honor at the end.

Didn't expect the uncle to transform into a rider, let alone that worlds "Ichi-Gata" with being based off of the first Showa Rider. At least we also got a bit of an explanation about how this AU's kind of connected to your main story along with when/how the villains' got their other watches.

Nice to see the Ichigou Armor there. A bit surprising to me that you gave Tsuki an Ohma Form of her own here, though I guess I probably should've expected that considering things. Makes me now wonder if you're going to have that Ohma Zi-O for Tsukuyomi become her final form at the end of the story like with Sougo when he becomes Ohma. That and a slight hope for me on a possible original form for Woz later on (sorry, I just can't help but wonder and hope for my favorite character from that rider season).

Nice work with how all of the riders showed off and shined in the big fight there, both a mix of what happened in Heisei Generations Forever and Over Quartzer.

Interesting way to have the Cameo for your Zero One story happen like it did there...along with what Izu said about that time distortion possibly affecting the riders equipment in ways they might not notice/recognize, not to mention that stone that Aruto picked up. Something tells me that's going to be involved/brought up for some alternative forms/power ups for the three later when/if you do a crossover chapter of Reiwa Generations or something?

Well that's it this time around. Time to wait and see what happens next in the main story.

Later.
12/5/2020 c2 5Shooting Star Dragon 3000
has stopped working
Deadpool: hang on i got this, gaim is overrated
*shoots him in the head* THAT CLIMAX WAS THE GREATEST THING I'VE EVER READ!

Next time: back to the original timeline
12/5/2020 c2 MKDemiGodzilla-Warrior
Huh...so the post credit scenes from the Hyper Battles were leading to this? That’s not what I was expecting to be honest. I thought it was going to contribute to the Revised story when it gets to the Over Quartzer movie. Still, pretty great story and pretty interesting adaptation that ends a lot differently. I do like how the Zero One section is like in the Over Quartzer movie. I’m curious to see if you guys will adapt Reiwa First Generations judging from that ending to the Zero One section. Also wondering if this will be mentioned in the Revised story considering they did steal the Ride Watches from them. Still don’t get how they never noticed them gone.
12/5/2020 c2 SuperiorSpyder
Okay, you guys really nailed your take on 'Over-Quarzter'. A Romeo and Juliet Styled Narrative? Wow, never expected that, yet managed to make it work in ways I never REALXEYEZ (eh) would be possible. Seriously, I would've, again, prefer your guys' take on ZI-O than the 'real-deal' or at least someone who shared your ideas and talent in this kind of writing. Sadly reality can often be disappointing. Again you guys DID Amazing. Can't wait for you to complete your main ZI-O story very soon and your take on Zero-One story
12/5/2020 c2 Bladejack8
Amazing movie take guys. Since this Sougo is an alternate Sougo, will you guys do a special in the future where the two Zi-Os meet and take on a common foe together?
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