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for this one goes out to the one i've left behind

12/4/2020 c1 amehakay
Spot on characterization. Great story!
12/1/2020 c1 41smuffly
Ooh, a surprise post! And what a fantastic piece of writing. This fills the gap so perfectly and answers all the questions. I absolutely love it. I wholeheartedly agree with you about Declan and not only did you deal with him fairly, you also wrote his character so well that I could totally hear his voice and see his expressions. Clever, to finish by making him admit that he beat Shawn to the punch with Juliet that day - though I'm glad he did the honourable thing here and kept Shawn's secret after all, even though he originally threatened to expose it on that memorable occasion when Shawn and Gus discover his secret (and Curt Smith).

The flow of this piece is perfect too, following Juliet's thought process and then the conversation with Declan, every part of which rings true. Love, love, love the way she thinks about THAT moment in the foyer - you described it so well. Also love the little exchange about Shawn, Gus and Nadia - a sweet moment of humour. I can't think of anything that would make this story work better. It's sympathetic to all concerned (including Shawn), despite their flaws and also because of them. You nailed it. It's canon now. Well done.

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