12/30/2020 c3 DIKR1229
A good short story in 3 chapters. The pace was steady and you never lost it, you jumped the line and missed some opportunities to have more chapters under your belt but you gave it an end. A proper end at that to an extra that appeared for a few seconds in the pilot.
A good short story in 3 chapters. The pace was steady and you never lost it, you jumped the line and missed some opportunities to have more chapters under your belt but you gave it an end. A proper end at that to an extra that appeared for a few seconds in the pilot.
11/7/2020 c1 27Chance Green G King
Huh, not to bad, and very simple. I like it, do continue this if your able to.
Huh, not to bad, and very simple. I like it, do continue this if your able to.