11/17/2020 c1 Guest
this was an interesting experimental story. it has some promise if you decide to flesh out the details more.
this was an interesting experimental story. it has some promise if you decide to flesh out the details more.
11/16/2020 c1 No Name Bard
I could get behind this as a story. Problem is, don't you have a couple other ongoing works as well? :P
I could get behind this as a story. Problem is, don't you have a couple other ongoing works as well? :P
11/16/2020 c1 1Toby860
Interesting concept. If they were pure enough to become guardiand what happens to those not pure enough. Is there a place they moved on to or do they remain as orbs until eaten. I dont see how it could go further but its an ok oneshot.
Interesting concept. If they were pure enough to become guardiand what happens to those not pure enough. Is there a place they moved on to or do they remain as orbs until eaten. I dont see how it could go further but its an ok oneshot.
11/15/2020 c1 peacemask
you made a great, and really amazing job, so beautiful, so sad and happy at the same time, I feel the los of those two in the real world while I am happy for them being together even like that, really wonderful keep going
you made a great, and really amazing job, so beautiful, so sad and happy at the same time, I feel the los of those two in the real world while I am happy for them being together even like that, really wonderful keep going