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1/10 c3 4TheDarklord34
chapter 4?
1/9 c3 9Milky Boy Blue
It was a little jarring that Mabel seemed so bright and happy after the trauma of last night, even if she does kinda have her brother back. Especially since Stan and the others were obviously still upset. But I enjoyed it more after they'd explained the situation and liked that Wendy and Stan were both doubtful and assumed Mabel just wasn't coping with her loss. Reasonable conclusion, even in an unreal town.
I'd say my favourite parts are when Dipper and Mabel are conversing in her mind, sharing thoughts and feelings and memories and really becoming closer than ever before but also struggling with the impracticalities that causes when no one else can hear. That's done very well and it's nice you don't shy away from how uncomfortable that can be for private matters. It'll be interesting if they get into an argument or disagree on something later, especially since people tend to hold back for people they care about but they don't have that luxury.
1/7 c1 33 story man
It makes me really happy to know that people are still writing quality stories about this masterpiece of a show. And I must say, this is an incredible idea. I can’t wait to see where you take this.
1/7 c3 7MyExWifeStillMissesMe1
Ooh, interesting! Can’t wait to see where this goes.
12/30/2020 c1 A Petty Theif
This is amazing! will this be continued or is this it?
12/14/2020 c2 Guest
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12/4/2020 c1 Guest
Hi i'm Shaeril McBrown

i need help

i'm being harassed by a teacher named Lisa Ware-Krantz

she is a pedophile

she sends me lots of death threats through emails and text messages

she flames me on my main account and calls my stories pigshit

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please help me report her

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12/1/2020 c1 AGENTDB2
"the sound of pure anguish"
nice princess bride refrence, i see you are a man of culture as well
11/28/2020 c2 9Milky Boy Blue
So Axolotl is Dumbledore? Not too unbelievable for Gravity falls, might explain a few things.
Started your recommendation a while ago, really enjoyed it, it's one of those I put aside to focus on my work and REALLY want to get back to when I've finished some of the other dozen stories I've done the same for.
Axolotl is an interesting character, especially since so little's known bout it save its power and poem but I prefer it be written as mysterious, powerful and alien as possible, like it is here.
11/28/2020 c1 Milky Boy Blue
I've always enjoyed what-ifs for Sock Opera. One of the darkest episodes that only gets darker the more I watch it. I'm also going to use Google translate and probably have bilingual people laugh at my character's dialogue. Interesting start to a different story, but it was clever of Dipper to think of ideas to keep himself around a little longer.
11/26/2020 c2 3ChaseisKing
Very good chapter! I especially liked how you portrayed the Axolotl as a being who can grant extraordinary wishes but has to operate within set rules. Additionally, the reunion between Dipper and Mabel, despite the morbid circumstances, was characterized very well.

Overall, great job! Can't wait for more!
11/25/2020 c2 happy.seth777
I could tell. That is my all time favorite fanfic, and the Axolotl seems very similar. Hopefully it isn't quite as incompetent as the one in that fic though. I was actually thinking the shapeshifter could potentially have something to do with Dipper getting "his" body back, since the electron carpet still exists(it was put in the attic). I feel like, since the carpet switches minds, not bodies, it could potentially switch Dipper's and the Shapeshifters minds, which would resolve the current issue but create a new one. How would Mabel deal with a homicidal monster constantly tormenting her, and how would Dipper deal with the guilt? As far as who the Axolotl is referring to, I would guess Aang from TLAB.
11/25/2020 c2 Kraven the Hunter
Another word of advice before tackling Straightjacketed's stuff: be prepared to watch these characters you've come to know and love SUFFER.
11/25/2020 c2 Fili9999
Its Harry Potter right? Good story so far
11/24/2020 c2 7MyExWifeStillMissesMe1
Ever since I read the first chapter I always thought that if Stan got Ford back, he could build a robot Dipper and move Dipper’s consciousness into it, then boom! Dipper’s back but this time he’s bulletproof. Loved this chapter though.
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