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7/4 c1 39lalez
Hi,
so I am late to the party... but that's okay. I'll slowly work my way through this story and catch up.
I like this opening chapter, it sets the scene. Sam feels a little OOC with his almost highschool jock like attitude "I am going to fight" and it is going to be interesting if he succeeds (I hope not)
I preferred Andy with Nick or even Luke. (Still mad they made him a cheat to get the opening for Sam...)
And on that note:
The one thing I've been confused about in your chapter. You write Andy never thought about marriage but she was engaged to be married to Luke at the start of season 2 even if it was not his intention she said yes. So...
Just thought I'd mention that.
Anyways, I'll read on now :)
6/4 c28 Guest
Happy to see an update and glad they talked. I think both their reactions under the circumstances were normal all things considered but did put a barrier between them.
4/15 c26 mcswereklover
Beautiful, I must admit I was straight sam and Andy but how you have written this between nick and Andy is beautiful. Please update.
3/3 c24 Guest
Glad Nick is alive but sad he is paralyzed, it must be devasting especially for someone young and active. Can guess what he asked and hopefully there are some McCollins babies some time in the future but right now they need to focus on adjustment. As always, they are s team and that goes a long way.
2/4 c22 Guest
Doesn't sound good. While realistic considering their jobs, don't want to see romance end that way. Hopefully they survive and find out Andy is pregnant during their hospital time.
1/22 c21 10Stop-Police
Love, love, love this. I’ve fallen back into the Mccollins ship and I refuse to leave. This story is amazing but that last sentence scares me. Amazing writing ?
1/2 c17 Guest
Love how supportive Nick is. Hopefully Tommy makes it but she is not alone regardless - Nick is what she needs when she needs it. Even right from the beginning of their relationship when he was the perfect break up buddy; he is there and he knows just what to say.
12/26/2020 c16 Guest
Sorry for Tommy but sometimes past drinking does catch up with you. Glad Andy decided to talk to him anyway, people who come out of comas, etc often say they hear what people say or at least know someone was there. And good on Nick (and Sam) for being there when she needed them.
12/24/2020 c16 tory72
Such a sad chapter hope he pulls through this .
Glad to see that Sam,collins,Andy can all get along glad that Sam and Andy still have a semi close friend ship .
12/20/2020 c15 tory72
Awesome story :) not a big fan of Andy and Nick but love this story !
11/26/2020 c8 Guest
Lovely wedding!
11/15/2020 c2 Guest
Aww. Love the happy ending and that they both wanted to propose to each other, it's great to have the same goal in mind. Also like that there was closure between Andy and Sam, yes they will always care for each other, but their time is past. Sometimes the moment is gone and you just have to look to the future whether it be with another or not.
Enjoyed this Rookie Blue story from you and hope to see more.
11/15/2020 c1 Guest
Excited to see a McCollins story and Oliver is right; Sam is too late. He already made the choice to move on with and start a family with Marlo. There may have been passion there, but it is just not enough; communication, friendship & consideration make a lasting relationship.

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