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25m c19 roses0002
Great chapter! I enjoyed the introduction of your new character and seeing Kitty settle in with the family. It's interesting that Lady Julia thinks Kitty and her brother marrying is a possibility given the disparity in wealth and consequence. They don't seem to have any romantic chemistry yet and I still have Mr. Lucas in the back of my mind as a possibility for her. I'll be very interested to see where things go!
32m c19 1SunriseImagination
I like this story a lot, Kitty's character growth is a slow and steady process that I love, but I keep wondering at what point will it interconnect back with her family. Will it ever connect back to the canon story?
10h c17 Guest
I love fan fictions about kitty, because she is a girl starved of love from her family and I feel for her and want her to have a happy ending even more than Lizzy. Yours is one of the best stories I have read so far(it made me cry) and I really want to see this story completed. BTW I have a bias, I really want her to end up with the older brother the Earl.
10h c18 1ainokea2810
Great storytelling. I’m intrigued to see where this is going.
15h c18 roses0002
Great chapter! Loved all the descriptions of the house and it's nice to see the girls getting closer. Also appreciated the view into Kitty's mindset at this time.
17h c17 nanciellen
Great chapter. Thank you so very much for this story. Best wishes for a Happy New Year.
19h c18 Guest
Looking forward to reading more. Kitty is still insecure, but she is starting to be open to opportunities set before her. I wonder if Julia has had an encounter with Wickham.
19h c18 Guest
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19h c18 MinnieMouse
I think that both navy men (Henry Lucas and Captain Talbot) sound more like very good friends and/or brothers. But I do love their easy friendship with Kitty. The brothers she never had. ;)
I also think Lady Julia doesn't know Wickham but there has been some other rogue who has broken her heart.
21h c18 Guest
I'm totally rooting for the Captain to fall in love with Kitty. They do seem to belong together!
19h c18 gabyhyatt
I Think the capitan is only a friend, maybe the brother is the one who is n love with her
19h c18 liysyl
Interesting chapter I am looking forward to seeing what this visit brings. Thanks for sharing your story.
20h c18 Belatrixie
Although I like the idea of Kitty and Henry Lucas, or even if she grows infatuated with the Captain, I think they act like siblings but okay, Kitty has to much grownup to do and self knowledge on her journey.
And wow, I think Julia knows George Wickham.
20h c18 skabir33
So is Julia's former beau Wickham and will Kitty be the one to warn her family?
22h c14 Colleen S
Clever story!
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