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4/22 c2 45WorldsWorthWords
Fun!
Calvin's ranting and complaining on the bus was hilarious, as well as the tangent about everybody else and the bus driver.
"Make him think he's hallucinating!" XD XD XD
Ha ha, Mr. Bill seems a little familiar, no?
Sakura and Nikola seem kind of like the anime/techno equivalent Calvin and Hobbes. Intriguing. I loved Hobbes trying to cut out at the first sign of a robot.
There were a couple mistakes I noticed: One is the phrase "If only he got up at this hour earlier" didn't make sense, or at least I didn't get it, ha ha. The other is "The if someone makes fun of Hobbes" line.
3/29 c1 WorldsWorthWords
I loved the opening with Calvin taunting the school bus. XD

Aww, I was kinda hoping to find out what Calvin's mom was reading. We don't really get much view of her interests.

Calvin taking all the tuna in the house was quite clever!

I never read the original, but I'm quite enjoying this so far!
1/30 c1 RamForJesus
Good beginning! You did a very good job of making me look forward to the next chapter.
Thanks!

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