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1/9 c7 Guest
Good chapter. I wonder who put Uriah under that simulation. Also thanks for considering my idea about how Tris and Four meet. It means a lot to me. And your right that really doesn't happen in other fanfics which is why I thought it would be a good idea. It's different. Anyways can't wait until the next chapter. Hope your year is going good so far.
1/7 c6 Guest
Where is he? Also thanks for verifying thwt Christina and Tobias will not be together in this story. Ypu have to be carful how you word things. And yes I am happy now. Can't wait until your next update. Wish Teis didn't have to go through her initiation again. It will make another risk of people finding out she's Divergent. But anyway thanks for the update.
12/27/2020 c7 Guest
Anytime soon? They shouldn't get together at all! Choose your words carefully. By the way I thought the faction system was destroyed? And are you by any chance going to use my idea of the fight between Tobias and Tris? I would appreciate it. I think it could be an interesting and drama filled idea.
12/26/2020 c7 Guest
Oh what do you mean about Chris and Four will not be getting together any time soon? You are not planning they get together right? Please Don't do that, I will hate it if that happens.
12/26/2020 c6 Guest
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAA!
Thank you, thank you, thank you , Thank you! For considering. Continuing this story here ,thank you again, you make my day and with me you has a FAN # 1 , an a loyal reading, Merry Christmas! Oh :) thank you again.
12/26/2020 c6 Guest
Well I'm reviewing on my NEW PHONE! My old one was terrible but this one is way better. Samsung Galaxy J4 Core. Woohoo!
12/26/2020 c5 Guest
Stay here please. I can't read on that.
12/25/2020 c5 Guest
Nooooooooooooooooo, please ! Don't move this story to wattpad I wouldn't be able to follow it, I would be devastating if you do not continue writing on this fanfiction site ,I am obsessed with this story already.
12/24/2020 c5 Guest
Please continue on this website
Thank you I love this story
12/24/2020 c5 Guest
Nooooooo, please continue here , I love your story and I wouldn't be able to read it on wattpad, I am so sad and frustrated , with this notice , why you did posted on wattpad since the begging instead to make us happy and interesting in this story and then desired to move it from here, how sad .
12/24/2020 c4 Guest
really good chapter , I don't like your story, I LOVE it! , you are a talented writer so you will know how to keep it good, my only suggestion is , all ways try to stay into the common sense ( same way it had been written) and nooooo Four Chris.
12/23/2020 c4 Guest
I hope Tobias does kill David because I've wanted him dead ever since he killed Tris. Also just my own opinion, I would still be mad at Caleb because he is technically the reason Tris is dead, because she saved him by going in instead of him.

Idea-What if Tris and Tobias had a little fight when he saw Tris? ( He will still be sad because she died but yet is still alive, but is a bit mad because she left him. She could of let Caleb go but instead she went, so that could be why he is a bit mad. )

Love the chapter. Maybe end the next one where Tobias was very happy to see Tris then ends up mad? Cliff hangers keep people reading. And then maybe Tobias starts to forgive Tris when he see's Uriah and Tris becoming too close. ( Uriah lost Marlene too remember? )

Thanks for considering ideas. :)
12/23/2020 c3 Guest
So it turns out I've been so busy with another fanfic that I forgot to check on this one. No worries I read fast and will catch up. Also just know that if you don't have more loyal readers, like me, ( Thanks for comment ) then they are missing out big time. It might not be exactly right but it's a fan fiction! Who cares about it being exactly right? It's all in the imagination. Love the chapter. Word of advice, keep the cliff hangers coming. It's what keeps people reading. :)
12/24/2020 c5 7WiseGirlDivergence46
Please stay on here or do both. Wattpad doesn't like my device and I would really like to continue to read this story
12/22/2020 c3 Guest
Thank you for the update its another breathtaking chapter.I don't know ,I thought Four found Tris, I can't wait to find out also who is at the compound , I just need to tell you ,I am so afraid about Four move on with Christina I can't stand it just the idea make my blood boiling, so please don do that, I begging you.
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