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1/2 c1 BoredKing
I don't want to sound rude or anything but you really do need to work on your grammar. You have plenty of stories and I've read/am reading several of them but in all of them you have sentences that just drive my inner grammar nazi in a rage.

The first paragraph in this story is a single sentence and its horrible. Its just one giant run on sentences with the wring verb tenses. The same errors are present all throughout this chapter and it makes it really hard to read since I have to stop and decipher what i just read.

Seriously try using a grammar checker, if you are and its not pointing things like this out try a new one. I personally use the spell check (its checks more than just spelling) in word and the grammarly add-on to check my papers for school.
1/2 c1 2dingo-822
Not bad, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes, I wouldn't mind a new style of alien Harry. Maybe have it that the dragon left some DNA in his body along with the Basilisk and Phenix. This will merge with the alien DNA (dragon's blood, could have been bleeding from when it hit the rock when it swiped at him and missed) give him horns and wings of the dragon, the stare and scales of the basilisk and the regenerative healing of the phoenix tears. The basilisk scales can be covered by his chitin armour. Have his body, head and hair look like a predator's without the big mouth. Or even have him look like this just with an alien twist www. artstation artwork / K9Amo
12/31/2020 c1 Guest
Please have Hermione, Padma, and Pansy as part of the harem.
12/29/2020 c1 marcol.plata007
I'm looking forward to see chapter 2 and all other chapters
12/27/2020 c1 57Perseus12
Well, well, well, it would seem that Sil have found her destined mate: Harry Potter which I'd love to see the next chapter. *Thumbs UP!*
12/27/2020 c1 4kent-jensen
enjoying
12/27/2020 c1 Guest
Please create story harry x alien/predator
12/26/2020 c1 marcol.plata007
I love this story so far please continue this fanfiction . I would like to see chapter 2 and all other chapters in feature
12/26/2020 c1 ShannTheMann256
dumbles is screwed when he finds out that harry is abducted by a sexy alien woman
10/10
12/26/2020 c1 innis31
I'm interested in seeing how things will play out
12/26/2020 c1 Zekeextreme08
Awesome story update soon please
12/25/2020 c1 IJustWannaReadEpicStories
this was rather badly written, I'm afraid. it's like you keep leading up to something in every sentence but ends it abruptly and starts a new. you seem to have a low to none concept of grammar and most word meaning. this is a shame. the plot seems interesting, though vague from the summary.
12/25/2020 c1 2te.nellis
Merry Christmas. I loved ten chapter!
12/25/2020 c1 xxPercyRoxxx
Interesting story concept and can’t wait to read more.
12/25/2020 c1 Guest
Good start
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