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7/24 c22 davidkline177
not a bad chapter. iroh is a straight up villain as his mind set shows he knows ozai was abusive but dose not even attempt to see reason. aang is a flake selling out his fellow avatar. all and all pretty spot on. the story was a little hard to fallow at some points but still very good.
6/14 c20 davidkline177
good story so far. let's see where it goes
6/13 c11 davidkline177
not bad I like it so far
3/23 c20 1Laval Asher
Wow this chapter was very great.
3/16 c19 josephkost
Thank you so much for the shout out a few chapters back lol. So apparently I don't get notifications for story updates, otherwise I wouldn't be so far behind. I'm all caught up now so let's get to the review.

Zhao's deathis it wrong for me to have wanted him to suffer more lol. Nah but I am quite happy to see that rat meet his maker. Dude was a total creep.

Katara and Azula's interactionsthier growing dynamic is very interesting. It appears they do have some feelings for each other, or at least Katara does unless I'm misinterpreting the cookie scene in the kitchen with Toph. These feelings are only mentioned briefly so I'm not entirely sure which direction you are planning to take thier relationship (It's no secret that Azutara is my personal favorite AtLA pairing. Weather or not it works for your story or making it a Azula x Ty Lee x Katara is up to you. Seeing Ty Lee recognize the same protectiveness that she has for Azula in Katara has me thinking your leaning towards the letter of my two guesses. That would be quite interesting. it's not a pairing dynamic I've seen before lol) Them working together to heal people was a very nice touch. I can't touch on there interactions without mentioning how Azula seems to be going to Katara for comfort. It's really sweet and one of the things I've been really enjoying about this fic. Katara understands some of Azula's pain which puts her in a great position to comfort Azula. I can't wait to see how they both developed as the story progresses.

Ty LeeSeeing a jealous Ty Lee is honestly pretty funny. A big part of that is Azula not recognizing that or actually feeling jealous which must be frustrating to Ty Lee lol. I'm surprised her and Katara didn't kill Iroh or Zuko with how extreme their reactions were. I can't wait to see more of her development.

Overall I am enjoying the story. A lot of the times you have me wanting to reach through the screen and give Azula a hug. Her interactions with the Gaang so far have been interesting and I look forward to how thier group dynamic forms from here. I will be checking in tomorrow since I now know when the next chapter will be up haha. well done so far
3/8 c23 1haytsun
maizula scene when well too!
zuko and iroh ugh nice job tylee
3/7 c23 1Laval Asher
Wow, this chapter with Azula at her breaking point was really great.
3/6 c22 1haytsun
nice chapter, i love that part azula told aang about fire

i cant choose between azutara and tyzula, can they be together with azula
2/27 c20 6CoziB
Ok so I really don’t like how they look like a freaking rug so I changed there forms. But, they are still the same spirits otherwise. Like whoever designed them must have been high bc they remind me of the flying rug from Aladdin
2/25 c20 Guest
both vatoo and Raava enter the fic interesting,
raava just like vatu look like a kite, a glowing bluish white kite, but a kite nontheless, i wonder if wan will appear to
2/25 c6 4my-dearest-COMMA-angelica
The plot was pretty good at first but now the plot is jumping around. I have context because I've watched the show but it's still hard to understand what's going on.
2/25 c4 my-dearest-COMMA-angelica
great chapter, but the bold was a bit weird.
2/25 c2 my-dearest-COMMA-angelica
Really great chapter and I love the plot of this fanfiction. One thing- You seem to be mixing up "week" and "weak" and "woman" and 'women". Thats pretty much it. Good job!
2/25 c20 1haytsun
nice chapter! and yes tyzula too! raava and vaatu is out!
what will katara tell aang
2/11 c19 haytsun
i cant wait for more past out! azula needs hug!
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