2/7 c1 139Chocolate X My Mouth
AHHHHH THIS WAS SO CUTE!
You seriously wrote Phinabella so naturally here. I feel like this is a canon confession that could've come out of the show, had we not gotten the ending we got for this... Isabella is a hero and she deserved that kiss! Phineas deserved that kiss! WE deserved that kiss!
But your fic is so good, I can accept it as canon with no issue. It was well written, felt straight out of the episode, and I could almost see the confession before me! Great job my fren! 3
(also Ferb's 'nah' was SO FUNNY - idk why but I legit almost died laughing there XD)
AHHHHH THIS WAS SO CUTE!
You seriously wrote Phinabella so naturally here. I feel like this is a canon confession that could've come out of the show, had we not gotten the ending we got for this... Isabella is a hero and she deserved that kiss! Phineas deserved that kiss! WE deserved that kiss!
But your fic is so good, I can accept it as canon with no issue. It was well written, felt straight out of the episode, and I could almost see the confession before me! Great job my fren! 3
(also Ferb's 'nah' was SO FUNNY - idk why but I legit almost died laughing there XD)
12/31/2020 c1 An old friend
I was half-expecting for this all to get erased again ala 'At2D' or something like that, but I guess the reason you wrote it like this is because you were sick of that always happening. Or maybe the teasing was half the appeal. I don't know, so much must have changed since we last spoke.
Forgive me for reaching out like this. Recent events have taught me that life is too short for grudges. I'm sure by now you know who this is. I will leave with this request, don't you think it's time we talked? Put the past behind us and let the healing begin? You know where to find me. Don't hesitate, I implore you.
I was half-expecting for this all to get erased again ala 'At2D' or something like that, but I guess the reason you wrote it like this is because you were sick of that always happening. Or maybe the teasing was half the appeal. I don't know, so much must have changed since we last spoke.
Forgive me for reaching out like this. Recent events have taught me that life is too short for grudges. I'm sure by now you know who this is. I will leave with this request, don't you think it's time we talked? Put the past behind us and let the healing begin? You know where to find me. Don't hesitate, I implore you.