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6/19 c1 Adam's Gal
Terrific story for Christmas - thank you ?
12/28/2020 c1 seawitchnan
Great Christmas Story, Little Joe causing Adam problems again. But the big brother still went into protective mode! Hope Easter comes soon !
12/22/2020 c1 Guest
What a delightful story and, I might add, beautifully written - well done - and thank you!
12/23/2020 c1 Adamsbabygirl
That was cute. Merry Christmas!
12/23/2020 c1 13gaben
That was so much fun... thank you merry Christmas.
12/22/2020 c1 60AC1830
I couldn't wait to read this again. What a delightful story of misadventure. That Little Joe was a pistol and poor Adam got the brunt of it, but he still managed to stay one step ahead of his little brother, well until the teacher became involved. (giggle). All your characterizations were spot on. This would have made a wonderful episode.
12/22/2020 c1 23wx4rmk
We all need a little laugh now and again and this fit the bill perfectly! Such a strong declaration at the end for a ten-year-old. Give it a few years and we'll see if he still thinks the same way.

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