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16h c3 12Princess of Words
Loki and Mrs. Selvig have mastered the art of insulting each other through perfectly polite behavior, which is quite entertaining to watch. Jane punching Hammer (based on Peggy's teaching) and Loki coming to her rescue was quite an interesting incident! I also like how it prompted Loki to do something kind without an agenda behind it. Speaking of agendas, it will be interesting to see how Jane's plot of never marrying advances. I like how she thinks his name fits him but isn't quite right. Their continued Robin Hood references are also enjoyable.
I'm enjoying catching all the new MCU character appearances! I saw Howard, Peter, Natasha, and Darcy in this chapter alone.
1/9 c2 Princess of Words
Somehow, I think Loki is going to become more invested in this new plan than he expects. I enjoyed Loki and Jane's interactions, and it's fun that they keep involving books.
Once again, I'm having fun finding how the Marvel characters fit into this world. I think it's really interesting how you're combining characters from different series within the MCU: Jane and Peggy being cousins, Justin Hammer being part of a party at Steve's family's house. Speaking of Steve and Peggy, I hope they continue to be in the story.
1/9 c1 Princess of Words
This is a really interesting premise for a story! I like seeing how you weave MCU characters into this world. The narration in Loki's segments matches his voice really well, and I enjoy his occasional humor.
1/5 c2 DarkFay
Looking forward to more!
1/3 c2 8katie.pierce23
Love his plotting! Another great chapter :)
1/3 c2 20jane9699
very interesting
12/27/2020 c1 Kate
Already completely obsessed with this story!

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