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4/2 c2 7239addict101
"I would sell you to Satan for a corn chip"
HOW
HOW HOW HOW do you this?
I promised (I think) a review on chapter 2 so here I am.

I like the way Nellie was introduced.
I also like how you caught the way Dan felt helpless and a little worthless just wandering through the apartment.
Again the banter oh my word
Even Nellie's banter was good like seriously

Also I think I may have said this before but you are genuinely an amazing writer. I was surprised when I read chapter one, not even going to lie, because it seems that often we get new writers and it takes them a while to catch up-but you're already there!
1/15 c1 39addict101
OH MY GOSH OKAY I HAVEN"T EVEN READ THIS YET BUT OH MY GOSH YOU WROTE SOMETHINGGGGG
WELCOME TO THE FANDOMMMMM

alright i'm gonna actually read this now

"What are they gonna do marry you harder" hahaha I laughed out loudd this was good you capture Dan very nicely

his comfortable radius around Ian would be like a mile away hahahahaha that was goooddddd

Okay alright
This was really good.
Like no actually this was /good/
You caught the awkward tension (not sexual tension just tension) between Dan and Ian very well and the uncomfortableness of what the heck are they supposed to do now that they're married.
That was very well done.

Also, the Dan/Ian banter was on point... INAGW couldn't have done better herself ;)
Welcome to the fandom Anonymous!
I'm looking forward to chapter 2 :D
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