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7/30 c28 1MLPfanwriterluciddreamer
(ch 28) How dare u leave on a cliffhanger X3. I'm at the edge of my seat right now lol.
*Tries to time travel
*Fails
Yea, I have to wait for the next chapter dagnabit lol
7/30 c28 Ara celene
OOOoooOOH Steve is in " TrUuuooobllle" (O0O),I hope he gets him self out of there with the help of a few silver fissshhiies ;3,( or where ever the hickory dickory joules went..) I hope he didn't snitch or legit just ditch lol, tho really I hope Steve gets out of there :'3, with some help from the mobs(his friends that is) tho I don't think they will take his...situation likely...LMAO POOR GUY really can't take a break haha. And the mobs didn't even get an assurance about the potion yet cuz Steve didn't got back yet to tell them about it TvT ,also hope the hero brine is doing well with the unknown potion yet tho..

Any way ..can't wait to see the future of Steves fate hahha the dude really gets himself in a lot of TrUoBLe or douse trouble finds him lol ALOT,also another wholesome chapter and now waiting for the next XD. I too am excited for the next chapters lol can't wait to see how things will go now that Steve got him self in another predicament XD
7/29 c23 Ara celene
I do have to say that all these cities and towns have there own lore and one of the reasons I love this fic too XD, also love how each chapter was put in with a lot of care and passion and I say keep doing what u love and enjoy also I'm a new reader,been reading these fics for a couple of days now haha and I really loved it so far, almost close to the next chapters too lol ,any way I,,a go read me now D
7/28 c18 Are celene
WOW Alex is here now too?! Wow this must be my favorite chapter with Alex hahaha XD ,(ehem) anyway when Agnes ask who is the God of flames is I thought that it was hero brine at first lol seeing as he has the ability to conjure fire and also knowing that it's kinda his element? But it was her actually lol, Also love how Alex kinda trick Steve to joining her to go to the ocean temple lol, I also liked how she is described here too I also loved her personality "YEY" Steve has new friends XD
And I also like how he thought of Alex is kinda like the creeper kid lol(oh and fun fact from me? Me and the creeper general are the same hight QvQ, short squad for life LMAO TvT) also enjoying this chapter so far and onto the next one YEY I believe I'm also gonna enjoy it 8D
7/28 c17 Ara celene
Wow I have to say these chapters are pretty good and pretty long XD and I enjoyed all of it so far, coming close to the last chapters, can't wait hahhaa,also I love the character development in steve, or in his journey the chapters so far are pretty creative and very unique, herobrine here is not that bossy or cruel or powerful ,Steve is very unknown of the world and never once in his life did he venture out for a miner for the mobs I love them all :D,andvari and costiere the most tho haha because how there so talkative and how they tease and make fun of each other (tho mostly I think that's costiere lol),general malgun tho don't talk very much and his past must be very mysterious tho I think we'll get there soon XD,but mostly keep going with your awesome chapters and can't wait to read the rest of it!,but also there's always time for rest so also take to,e to rest and have fun too!.
-Ara celene
7/26 c27 MLPfanwriterluciddreamer
(ch 27) This is a pretty good chapter. And how rosebud and bright-eyes care for each other is just wholesome and sweet. And Joules. The disappearing door, there not being a potion maker in the city and him guessing that Brine was stabbed. Yea, he sus all right XD. He is a pretty fun character tho.
7/26 c1 Ara celene
Wow... I like this fanfic already :D,it's pretty long too. I'm still far away so I'm gonna try and catch up to the next cool story!

Can't wait to read all this X3
7/23 c26 1ScarOfHerobrine
ahhhh ohhh golly

YAS Steve bonding with wounded Hero is BESTTT aghhh

LOVE Hero's silver eyes...and his blindness reminds me of an unfinished fic by NotPaul! Sunlight got into his eyes and reflected around, making it harder and harder to see. However, at night, when light was low, Hero could see better than most. A weakness, and yet a strength as well!
Also, him hearing Steve's heartbeat is just absolutely poggers aghhh I need to leave more reviewwwwssss LOVE THIS STORYYYY
7/21 c26 1MLPfanwriterluciddreamer
(Ch 26) I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! The relationship that's building between Herobrine and Steve is so precious. You are killing me with adorableness. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
7/20 c26 UnKnOwN-UsEr8
My oh my, this story is awesome! It's been quite some time since I've read such a plotheavy and well written fic. Your character and story development are set in a great pace (not too fast but not too slow either). The turns of events are not really forseeble and that makes the story much more exciting than it already is, so awesome job on keeping the suspense up even in the normally less suspenseful parts of the story. Waiting patiently as well as excited for the next updatewhenever that may be, don't stress yourselfHave a nice day (or night)

-J
7/19 c25 1ScarOfHerobrine
YASSSSSSSSS

Agh this is so fricking whumpy, Hero cauterizing his own wound...golly I wanna USE thattttt it's such a good ideaaaa

I'd love for Steve to become a little bro to Hero and his own brotherrr
7/12 c25 1MLPfanwriterluciddreamer
(ch. 25) Oo yee Brine's awake! And I love how Herobrine and Steve's friendship is coming along. Great chapter as usual!
7/9 c24 1ScarOfHerobrine
nnNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOooOOOoOOOOOOO!

BRINEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
7/5 c24 1MLPfanwriterluciddreamer
(Ch 24) oh mah gosh this was an interesting chapter. And nuuuuu Brine got hurt. I actually ended up crying lol. I don't want him to die. He just can't. I tbh have no idea what I would do in that situation. Also, dream walking. That's a really cool concept.
6/2 c21 1ScarOfHerobrine
mMMPH SO PACKED WITH LORE AND AMAZING AS ALWAYS

KEEP IT UP!
THIS IS INCREDIBLE! :DDD
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