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2/26 c15 92LawDog
Bravo! I love how this ended! What a wonderful turnout for everyone.

And Walter's surprise for Paige really was the cherry on top. Well played, sir.
2/26 c14 2LawDog
:''' I just gave my weiner (dog) some gentle TLC while reading about your Charlie. That's got to be one of the worst days ever.

I hope your days are getting more normal and thanks for explaining Toby's actions. He needed to 'fess up about his behavior.
2/26 c10 2LawDog
I did not see that coming! Wow! Quite the situation.

And Tim's married now? Can't wait to see what other surprises are in wait!
2/26 c9 2LawDog
Florence and Sly? TMI! Poor Walter. How awkward would it be to hear one of your former friends doing the Wild Thing with one of your staff?
2/26 c6 2LawDog
I like where this is going!

What's up with Sly? He's finally manning up and asking Florence out! That's good!
2/26 c4 2LawDog
I like how this is progressing! Paige really does need to get it out of her system. Layla's good people too. :)
2/26 c2 2LawDog
I really like what you did with Happy, taking her to a new level as a confidante. Paige needs that right now.

The names of the women/girl are intriguing too. Layla? Clarice? I like those!

Since I've recently started to get to know you, please accept my very belated sympathies on your losses.
2/26 c1 2LawDog
Oooh! I can feel the daggers from up here! Paige isn't a force to be reckoned with, genius or normal.
1/9 c15 railman
Good way to complete a story really enjoyed it but will now need to re-read as a complete story
You re organised Scorpion really well what a tv series this make up of the team would make i just wonder how long it would be before Toby got back into is old irritating ways Hope to be reading more of your new stuff having recently read most of your back catalouge of work (having only been a member of the group for a few months ) Your style of writing reminds me of two of my favourite authors Clive Cussler and Lee Childs not so much the action that fills most of their work more the style of easy reading that you want to reach the end of the chapter quickly to find out what happens but at the same time you do not want to get there as you are enjoying it so much
All the best for the future
1/9 c15 1EHMALINE
beau chapitre n'abandonnez pas les histoires de réparation
a bient?t
1/8 c15 moodymel
A very good ending for a very good story. I really enjoyed it.
1/8 c15 Susan
This has been my favorite chapter so far. Still not crazy about Layla. She needs to find another job. But I am happy that Paige and Walter are working things out. Good adventure Tim. Hope you are staying healthy. Where I work, we are getting the vaccine next week. Yay!
1/8 c15 5Lucy Conan
What a beautiful conclusion, especially the endthough you scared me for a second before you revealed the identity of the eavesdropper at the diner. As beautiful as the conclusion is, as always, I hate it that the story ends, I really hope we will see more of this AU one day.
1/8 c15 Margaret Gautier
Wonderful story, and wonderful ending. The 2 teams are bonding well. It seems, that Paige and Layla have put forth a good working relationship, understand what their jobs calls for, each using their expertise. You also threw in a job for the teams, and got Cave an
assistant., and last but not least, Walter remembered that Paige and his 3 weeks were up, and surprised her for a romantic evening and night, in that famous black dress.
Your story ideas are far from over, you'll come up with future stories for this AU, Secrets and stories of the knights. Onward.
1/8 c15 Marie
Really nice chapter like always
I love fix-it stories
Than
Thank you
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