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3/13 c1 F
Sei italiana vero? Io sono una super fan dell' aurikku! Mi raccomando continua a scrivere, è davvero bella!
3/12 c1 F
I love aurikku an fiction! Pls update soon. I like a lot your story
3/12 c1 Yunie
I love your story! Great job! I'm an aurikku fan...Pls update soon
2/17 c2 Guest
Oops I sent my last review too soon! Anyway I love this story, looking forward to reading more from you! I started writing fan fiction when I was about 12 as well. That was about 15 years ago for me. I also like to translate fanfiction I notice that Indonesian stories are so good, so I will often translate them so I can read those too!
2/17 c3 Guest
I am in love with your story! You are a wonderful writer, I honestly would not have guessed that English was not your first language. The only thing that stands out to me is sometimes you use “him” instead of using “her.” I think this is common for people who speak Indonesian. English is my first language but sometimes I will use google translate and read fanfiction stories
1/12 c2 Guest
I can’t wait to get more of this honestly. I love it
1/14 c1 6yunabesaid
First of all I really enjoyed this! The first fanfic I’ve read in years. I’m glad to be diving back in!

I’m AMAZED that english is not your first language. You must have started learning it early or studied for many years, i would never have guessed. English is my first language and I literally looked up what confabulating meant because id never even heard the word before. I thought you were being tongue in cheek with using corneas. Very very good writing, considering it is a second language.
1/5 c2 Guest
Me: *reading this story*
“Finally some good fucking food”
Honestly though, this is looking really good so far, I can’t wait to read more 0.0

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