4/26 c12 Guest
One of the US state hehe
Something with the never seen
One of the US state hehe
Something with the never seen
2/28 c11 Guest
I really really liked this fan fic it wa really good and I wondered if you are going to put more chapters because I would LOVE to see who's on Keres list and Sophie's reaction!
I really really liked this fan fic it wa really good and I wondered if you are going to put more chapters because I would LOVE to see who's on Keres list and Sophie's reaction!
12/16/2020 c8 5moonlark123
ships *claps* are *claps* sailing *claps*
loved the tiana ; tam is like my third soulmate XD
anyways, good chapter!
~moonlark123
ships *claps* are *claps* sailing *claps*
loved the tiana ; tam is like my third soulmate XD
anyways, good chapter!
~moonlark123
12/4/2020 c1 moonlark123
this was pretty good! in case you didn’t know, you can use line breaks to split sections up. so instead of a/ns, you can separate it like that and title it Keefe’s Diary or something. just a suggestion, you obviously don’t have to do it like that.
can i just say, that ‘furious george’ joke killed me. i literally don’t know why I found that so funny, but i loved that XD
Dex and Biana’s ship name is Dexiana or Diana, btw.
I thought that Keefe’s personality was not ooc (idk how to word that XD) it seemed like canon. your writing seems really good and I’m looking forward for the next chapter!
~moonlark123:)
this was pretty good! in case you didn’t know, you can use line breaks to split sections up. so instead of a/ns, you can separate it like that and title it Keefe’s Diary or something. just a suggestion, you obviously don’t have to do it like that.
can i just say, that ‘furious george’ joke killed me. i literally don’t know why I found that so funny, but i loved that XD
Dex and Biana’s ship name is Dexiana or Diana, btw.
I thought that Keefe’s personality was not ooc (idk how to word that XD) it seemed like canon. your writing seems really good and I’m looking forward for the next chapter!
~moonlark123:)