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1/2 c2 101Dan Sickles
This was a great second chapter! Gillette is so cute and sweet and vulnerable. Sometime I wish we could have a chapter with Miss Swann and see how brave and fiery she is - it would underline how soft and sweet Gillette is compared to her. Gender norms are so restrictive! I wouldn't have changed anything in this chapter, except when Beckett says "I am a personal representative of the king. And I I am upholding the interests of the East India Company." He should stop there, end of story. After that nothing else is needed!
1/1 c2 Guest
Who doesn't love a bit of English repression? ;) I certainly do!

Great chapter, as always. Your writing is so great and it just fits naturally with the timeline. If there had ever been a POTC movie that featured these side characters, they'd certainly talk and behave just like in your story! (Minus the romance bit probably but you get what I mean haha.) "Your" Beckett is just like in the movies - but better. ;)

Please keep the dialogue coming, I'm so here for it!

-SP
12/14/2020 c1 Guest
Is it Christmas already? Yet another POTC fanfiction written by you, I'm so excited! I completely understand where you're coming from, haha, I miss The Devil and The Deep Blue Sea as well. *sigh*

This first chapter was veeery promising and I'm so looking forward to reading more!

-SP
12/12/2020 c1 Dan Sickles
This is wonderful! I am so impressed by the nautical knowledge and how easily you work in the correct terminology about the ships and guns. And how you explain the competing authority of the Company and the Navy and the British government! The way you describe Gillette in his dress uniform, and how intimidated he is by Groves, was so innocently sexy as well. Hope you update soon!

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