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12/9/2020 c5 nanajojo
Great story. I liked the role reversal.
12/9/2020 c4 52shari
Chapters switched because didn’t finish review. But Kitty is an honorable woman and said she’d give 200 for the help. Cora realized the emotional and sentimental value of the ring to Kitty. Love that Kitty gave Cora money just for herself
12/9/2020 c5 52shari
Of course doc took his family home. The end scene of Cora bringing Kitty her ring is tear inducing. Kitty is a woman of her word the 30” proves that but like that Kitty had something just for Cora
12/9/2020 c5 52shari
Putting 4 and 5 together. Cora is a special woman stuck in a horrible life. Cora came to Kitty’s defense and in return Kitty came to Coras defense.
12/9/2020 c5 61lostcowgirl
I love how the ending of the actual story borrows the dialog from Kitty Injured. The Epilog provides a final example of your skill with getting to the heart of characters. You show how greed overcomes all else for Rafe, including cowardice, while providing a greater depth of character for Cora that wasn't in the episode. You explain that she adapted to remaining because it was the only way to provide motherly protection to her damaged son. If she left Rafe would have destroyed Lootie figuratively & possibly literally.
12/9/2020 c4 lostcowgirl
It had to be difficult for you to find a way to get Lootie alone with Kitty except for the unconscious Matt, but you show your skill & imagination by doing it. I also like how Rafe went to town for Doc first due to bribery rather than threats as part of your scheme to have Lootie accost Kitty. Nice touch for Kitty to pull a Matt - that is, hit Lootie over the head rather than shoot him while that choice is available. It also allows for Lootie to be the one tied up rather than Matt or, in this case, Kitty.
12/9/2020 c3 lostcowgirl
How Cora Judson handles the 2 men in her household is hinted at in the episode, but you come up with a more than plausible direct method - if anger triggers their worst responses then remain calm.
12/9/2020 c2 lostcowgirl
Rafe & Lootie are essentially the same as they were in Kitty Injured, but in order to move your story along you have them out hunting, though probably not over taxing themselves. Of course, such activity is the only way those 2 could come upon Kitty & wounded Matt. I like how you throw in a typical Matt reaction. He's not worried about his own injuries but about what these 2 might do to Kitty while he's unable to protect her.
12/9/2020 c1 lostcowgirl
Being bushwhacked makes so much sense for Matt while out riding with Kitty whereas in the original it made sense for Kitty to be injured in a fall when her horse shied from the rattler. This chapter sets up a parallel but not identical retelling of the story in Kitty Injured.
12/9/2020 c2 MaryRoseEllen
I love this twist, great idea!
12/8/2020 c1 nanajojo
I know this is going to be great

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