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5/12 c9 HellRaiderS
Loved it perfect story keep the updates coming
5/9 c9 Guest
I think you should keep updating how you’re updating, as they say, you shouldn’t change something that works. I forget the actual quote, but it’s a thing.
5/5 c9 1kyuubi7
Honestly, you can keep doing what you're doing but planning/writing ahead isn't a bad idea really. This a great fic and I can't wait to read more, keep up the fantastic work my man!
5/3 c9 Monaxia
I prefer the long chapters, so I think you should keep doing what you're currently doing. If anything else then maybe write a whole book and release weekly chapters like you had said. It wouldn't be the same with short chapters, storytelling and detail wise.
5/3 c9 Atomicplane94
If it ain’t broke, don’t fix it. Keep what you have going in terms of chapter length. Also, about the OP characters, I have heard some good advice. The guy called it the rule of Titanfall. If everything is OP, then nothing is. All in all, you’re doing great.
5/3 c9 Guest
I understand putting Piper in CHB instead of Annabeth so it can be a bit different but imo Piper was never that good of a character in the books
5/3 c9 PhantomFuryJP
Really enjoying this story so far, I definitely like the way it’s going!
5/3 c9 Efrm202
I think you should
Keep doing what you doing lol
5/3 c9 Callum Runchman
Finally he's arrived at CHB. I get he's gonna be with Piper but where Annabeth? Is she not in this?
5/3 c9 7parallaxyt
Hey! So I've been following this story for quite a while now and I have to say, it's pretty good!
The storyline is well-written, and you haven't rushed Percy to CHB and provided some backstory, which is great.
Also, the Piper being at CHB was unexpected, so kudos! I do hope Annabeth isn't at CJ. Minerva doesn't canonically have brain-children as Athena does.
Also, I'd hate for this story to fall down on the terms of canonical events. Please do write something different instead of having the same events as the books with some tweaking and just replacing Piper with Annabeth.
I'm not saying to write something completely different. Just follow the main prophecies/quests if you want but add new characters, dialogues, and uncommon tropes.

Great work and keep it up!
5/2 c1 SentinalSlice
Just so you know, during the childbirth scene Lupa wouldn’t be sweaty. Wolves, like dogs, can’t sweat. Most things don’t sweat, that’s one of the amazing things about humans, we have one of the greatest temperature regulating systems out there.
5/2 c9 FadedDiamondDust
I like the longer chapters it makes the long wait for each chapter worth it
5/2 c9 2NiHaR OP
ahhh so is annabeth in the roman camp and will this be jasabeth or smtg just thinking pre emptively, even tho i hate jasabeth
5/2 c1 Warlord009
Oops meant long and slow updates not king and slow
5/2 c1 Warlord009
Also just a suggestion for if you decide to stick with the king and slow updates is just to have a short tldr at the end of chapters in the authors note to jog our memory when we start reading the new chapter
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