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7/6 c5 225SpicyHot1A
Oh, this is brilliant and fucking TERRIFYING! Everyone's worst nightmare. Well done!
5/2 c6 Guest
Wow ! Amazing, just to tell you that i love your stories ! And as a French person, I'm never satisfied so when I am, then it means that what have been done is really good !
4/28 c6 2theseathatsparkles
...yeah, that author’s note has me worried.

oh dude that little aside about Aizen not thinking of Gin as a person? Big owie. and now he’s being accused of discarding Gin, and even if this isn’t what he wanted...it’s kinda true. Ouch.
C’mon Sosuke, just apologize. “I’m sorry” would be preferable to “people say things when they’re angry that they don’t mean”. Have some tact.

And yep. Here we go. More crises. Sosuke possibly forgetting Gin, yep, here comes the horror. You are a horrible person, you know that? /j
Basically this entire thing gets more and more horrifying, and owie my poor heart can’t take this sort of stress! You’re stressing me out, Wolfie! AhhhhhHHHHH!
4/13 c5 theseathatsparkles
How dare you make me feel Emotions. >:0

Sooo we’re starting out with your patented “am I going insane” gig first, huh? Well, if you’re trying to break my heart, it’s working. And of course, a little bit of that psych horror never hurt anything. Except Aizen.
Forgetting what it’s like to have Gin in his life, huh? Well. That’s fun. And yet I’m not complaining, so long as we get that promised happy ending... :P

And of course we have the voice coming in with /impeccable/ timing as always, right in time to be a jerk. Poor AizenI just wanna give him a hug! Panic attacks aren’t fun. The voice being “just another annoyanceuh no sweetie it’s more than that,,,learn not to repress, baby! But we’ve already discussed the fact that Sosuke has the coping skills of a termite, so I won’t rehash that point.

But at least we’re ending on a slightly more hopeful note, even if there’s a 99.9% chance this ends up going very, very wrong. I’m curious to see what’s up with Gin’s reiatsu! Aizen seems to think that some Hollow yoinked Gin off the face of the earth, which seems...unlikely, but hey. Here’s hoping. I’d rather have some low-level Hollow be involved than, say, the voice.
We have a lead, though! That’s progress! And hopefully Aizen’ll get a respite from his ongoing existential crisis. That line about being watched, though...*shivers* eugh. I’m getting chills just from that sentence.

Lovely update as always! Thanks for the heartbreakuh, I mean entertainment.
4/6 c4 225SpicyHot1A
Aww, my heart was just breaking for Sousuke. T-T Sad and beautiful chapter. I'm waiting on pins and needles for the next.
4/6 c4 2theseathatsparkles
Oh, no. My heart!
Ok ok ok so there’s so much to unpack here, and sweetie if you give me an existential crisis AGAN I’m gonna be pissed. (I’ve been slowly battling your monster that you call heirverse and I think I’ve had two...no, at least three meltdowns. You are a very good author, and a terrible person.
...I kid, I kid. <3)
Starting out with Sosuke going and “squashing the ache inside down to the dark pit of himwhich, btw, is a fabulous line), OW. No, Aizen-baby... repressing your emotions isn’t healthy!
Then again, I’d eat my foot before expect Sosuke to use decent coping mechanisms, especially in your fics. You just love torturing the poor guy, don’t you?
...Yeah. So do I.
But I can’t blame him, not really. I mean, last time I checked I wasn’t Gin’s lover, and this premise on its own makes me want to curl up in my bed and cry, so Aizen’s going through a tough time.
(And that little bit of ByaRen for the soul... :P food for my yaoi-obsessed brain. Perfect.)
And then that throwaway Byakuya linemy own side.” I CACKLED. Just picturing Byakuya like the entity of chaos he is smiling and destroying everyone in the room with a few well-placed words. Oh yeah, baby.
On a less fluffy note, and I still find it impressive that you manage to put FLUFF into your HORROR fics without making it seem FORCED (yes im bitter, Aizen isn’t...jealous of Rangiku, is he? Or at least jealous that she gets to be happy and in love when he accidentally deleted his lover from reality?
Which, yeah. Ouch. Still feeling bad for Aizen on that note. As Zuko would say, “that’s rough, buddy”.
Aaaaaand now we have the internal crisis. Goddamnit.
So obviously Aizen’s in love with Gin (and so am I, though in a less steamy way) so he’s not gonna go and say “life is better without Gin”. That’s also horseshite, so I think I speak for all of us when I say Aizen didn’t really go there. On another note, it’s gonna be interesting to see what the long-term effects of Gin’s vanishing act are, because I DOUBT AS LITTLE CHANGED AS SOSUKE SEEMS TO THINK.
...
Whooops, and Sosuke’s spiraling again. At least there’s less reality-doubting this time, because that really screws with my mind. In a good way, but still.
“And Sousuke wasn’t sure he could ever want to live in this Gin-free world.” WELL THAT’S GONNA END BADLY *screaming into the void* AHHHHHhHhHH- baby no-...
...Kira is a terrible enabler. Even if it’s unintentional. And the existential crisis continues, of course. Poor baby.
And that last line. That’s foreshadowing. I might have gotten an F on an essay for English earlier this year, but I can still pick that out. It’s foreshadowing, and it’s gonna end with you cackling like a witch as you destroy your characters’ lives. I’ve read heirverse, remember?
Wellll we’ll see how far Sosuke goes to get back Gin. If somebody loses their soul or something, I’m gonna say that I called it.

Anyways, thank you for this lovely, wonderfully creepy update! Thank you for reading this “mammoth essay of a comment”, as someone once called my reviews, and keep up the good work! I left a comment on the Ao3 version of this fic a little while ago as a guest, as you might remember, but I migrated over here, so I expect you’ll see me stalkinguh, I mean readingyour fics pretty often.
...Don’t worry. I don’t bite. :P
2/9 c3 225SpicyHot1A
I think I would be running around, smacking people and screaming, "Why don't you remember!" Yeah, I would be tossed into the loonybin and Gin would never get found. I don't say this often, but poor Sosuke! T-T He's handling it better than most people would, but he's freaking out inside. This story is scaring the pants off me, but I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
1/20 c2 SpicyHot1A
*screams*
*pants and shivers, slowly catching breath*
*screams and faints*
*opens eye and winks at Wolfy*
That was terrifying and awesome!
1/19 c2 18HisagiKirigakure
Damn you... Gin can't disappear... I'm not ready for that. Kubo-sensei killed him and your making him vanish... NOOOOO!
Gin is missing his capital letter when Aizen is speaking to Rangiku
That being said, another great chapter.
Much Love sisterwolf
1/10 c1 HisagiKirigakure
Damn you... First line and I'm already crying. Why Gin? and that line 'not like I wanted you in the first place.' Shit. That stung me.
I'm nervous to find out where Gin is. Looking forward to reading more

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