1/17 c1 BgB
This is quite a different concept for any of the Fanfiction stories I have enjoyed over the past 4-5 years and I can't wait to read more! I like all the Bravo Team's characters especially Clay, Brock and Sonny, and of course, loved Dita and now Pepper. So, this sounds like it will become one of my favourites. I do hope you can write another chapter soon!
All the best, Barbara
This is quite a different concept for any of the Fanfiction stories I have enjoyed over the past 4-5 years and I can't wait to read more! I like all the Bravo Team's characters especially Clay, Brock and Sonny, and of course, loved Dita and now Pepper. So, this sounds like it will become one of my favourites. I do hope you can write another chapter soon!
All the best, Barbara
1/18 c1 15RoboFoxtrot
The feeeelinggssss *cries*
I loved this! It was heartbreaking yet sweet and hopeful at the same time. The comparison between an abused animal learning to love and trust again to Clay seems really accurate. Plus Brock being the one to make it is just spot on. He's quiet but he notices everything.
The feeeelinggssss *cries*
I loved this! It was heartbreaking yet sweet and hopeful at the same time. The comparison between an abused animal learning to love and trust again to Clay seems really accurate. Plus Brock being the one to make it is just spot on. He's quiet but he notices everything.
1/17 c1 a trace of amber
Aww cool way to explore his view of Clay and awareness that all isn't as it seems!
Aww cool way to explore his view of Clay and awareness that all isn't as it seems!
1/17 c1 19chyron girl
This is great. I loved that you tied a memory from Brock's childhood into having Clay join Bravo. Thanks for sharing.
This is great. I loved that you tied a memory from Brock's childhood into having Clay join Bravo. Thanks for sharing.