5/23 c1 1Balto63
Really love this though it hurts to read. I don't feel Jim ever really took the time to listen to why Pam felt the way she did, it was too easy to dismiss as "Pam won't ever take chances, I have to push her". Felt like he was changing into someone he & Pam would have joked about in the past. He also obviously wasn't being completely honest, she was shocked to see Athleap's office, how many employees were there, etc. I hope ultimately they stay together in your story but so far this is good angst. Love the way you write and the voices of Pam & Jim seem very authentic. I hope there is more to come!
Really love this though it hurts to read. I don't feel Jim ever really took the time to listen to why Pam felt the way she did, it was too easy to dismiss as "Pam won't ever take chances, I have to push her". Felt like he was changing into someone he & Pam would have joked about in the past. He also obviously wasn't being completely honest, she was shocked to see Athleap's office, how many employees were there, etc. I hope ultimately they stay together in your story but so far this is good angst. Love the way you write and the voices of Pam & Jim seem very authentic. I hope there is more to come!
5/16 c1 rose1909
Hey, I really like your story idea and the way your writing Jims thoughts. feels very in character to me
Hey, I really like your story idea and the way your writing Jims thoughts. feels very in character to me
1/19 c1 Guest
Love this so far! I'm excited to see where this goes. It's honestly refreshing to see Jim and Pam struggle because at times it felt their relationship was unrealistically perfect. So its interesting to explore this outcome.
Love this so far! I'm excited to see where this goes. It's honestly refreshing to see Jim and Pam struggle because at times it felt their relationship was unrealistically perfect. So its interesting to explore this outcome.