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7/15 c5 72Wendy McCalister
And again, this was a great update from you as usual! I love everything about it, from Botan’s frustration and jealousy and to that banter she and Kurama had. The implication at the end though… XD My perverted mind aside, looking forward to reading more from you!
7/1 c5 1kyoandyuya
Well... Ahaha! Nice exploration on age gaps trope XD. It's neat because as someone who's age is confused by many people like several times I can relate to Botan. XD

P.S It makes me realize that if Shuichi/Maya married in your Remember installment, she would inevitably know about Youko. That he doesn't reciprocate her feelings in that form will no doubt crush her. Actually, it's all angst route for both Maya and Shuichi/Youko when it happens until he dies for Youko to reunite with Botan. To know that her husband's other form doesn't love her and even pines for another woman is painful and humiliating. That she is nothing but second-best with said form forcing to settle for her because of his need to retain his human form. I'm sure Shuichi will assure her of his love but the fact remains, he couldn't control his other half's feelings which would serve as a long-lasting stumbling block. And when Botan comes into the picture come reunion events, she will know and perceive her as a rival for her husband's affections. Not to mention Youko himself will not restrain from comparing her to Botan in a cruel manner and no doubt will destroy her self-esteem, because we know Youko is capable of such maliciousness against people he hates. You already showed that here too.

And for all that Shuichi will want to solve the problem, he couldn't blame Botan due to the fact it wasn't her fault Youko remains strongly in love with her. It's a lose-lose situation for Shuichi/Maya. I've seen stories like these especially from our actors and actresses' love lives and I can tell you how painful and sad it is to hear the latter claiming on-cam they're insecure with their husbands' TOTGA (the one that got away).

Another ironic thing that in your story both Youko and Shuichi got their own TOTGA parallel lol.

Sheesh. My PS be longer than the chap's actual review XD.
7/1 c5 BarbieFairytopia
This is so cuteeee..i hope u always keep writing, you're amazing 3
7/1 c5 69ForbiddenDreams13
This update made my day! Well done!
4/10 c3 Kaikai.xoxo
Sweet but PAINFUL. I couldn't stand seeing Kurama with another woman. I really don't like that Maya girl. T.T
4/10 c1 Kaikai.xoxo
This is really great! Now I'm shipping Hagiri and Botan too. I think they look good. a.a
2/14 c4 72Wendy McCalister
But I liked it a lot lol. It was a new take because people usually write Kurama and Youko as both being romantically invested with Botan - myself included. Their different feelings for different people actually make sense. Makes me want to try the concept as well. You should honestly write more dear. I love your stories so far.
And damn, I do like Hagiri but I never went as far as shipping them THIS hard. But let me tell you that this particular installment of HagirixBotan honestly made me crave for more of the pair. Congratulations for turning me into a HagirixBotan starved fangirl XD I can’t wait to see who you pair Botan with next!
2/10 c3 69ForbiddenDreams13
This is a great collection! Your writing flows well, and you do a great job capturing Botan's innocence and playful nature. Also, HagirixBotan is a unique crack pairing. Again, well done on these stories! I hope to see more from you in the future.
2/2 c3 1kyoandyuya
I love this installment for the simple fact that it strikes the issue I have with shipping Shuichi/Kurama and Botan and how things unfolded where the two sides ultimately differ in their choices. Though there is an implication that Youko's desire bleeds into Shuichi despite ending things with Botan. I reckon that Shuichi is torn with his decision to end things and perhaps have slivers of regret over it. But all the same, I also feel Botan herself had fallen out of love with the redhead side and falling even deeper for Youko.

Anyway, I'm hoping to see a sequel of sorts for this one. Thanks for this!
2/2 c3 3sweetcanines
Aww Youkoooo *hugs*
2/2 c3 72Wendy McCalister
I- this was sweet. And you actually broke my heart with the fact that Youko and Botan couldn’t be together. Although, I do understand that it would be difficult considering that he still needs Shuichi’s body to live. Needless to say though, this was another great prompt. Would love to see more mischievous Kurama please! Lol. I’ll be waiting for an update.
1/26 c2 Wendy McCalister
So I just found this gem and I feel stupid for not noticing it sooner. Hagiri/Botan was cute and I’m looking forward to reading more upcoming multi/Botan chapters in the future XD. Kurama was so sly in this chapter, and it was cute and funny how Botan lost in the best way possible.
1/20 c1 h114
What 'others'? Botan i thought its only you and hagiri? Thats unfair Botan, Hagiri said yes cause he thought it only be you and him. Really not fair.

Author, not fair.
Like this chap, it really explain Hagiri's point of view on his feelings and attraction towards Botan. In detailed.

Keep it coming.

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