3/9 c1 Braconte
This is a very interesting story I like the idea of Ariel having a son in this alternate version of the movie. Chanson does seem different than Melody in terms of his personality when reading the early chapters. If you are going to continue this story I look forward to what you have in store. There's definitely some potential for great story telling with Chanson as a character. I'm curious on whether or not will get some inner monologue from him and how he feels with everything he's going through and how his relationship with his mother Ariel lead him to wanting to find out where he comes from. I agree that Disney doesn't often do the whole mother and son relationship all that much when it comes to their animated films the only one I can think of at the top of my head is Tarzan. Keep up the great work with your story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
This is a very interesting story I like the idea of Ariel having a son in this alternate version of the movie. Chanson does seem different than Melody in terms of his personality when reading the early chapters. If you are going to continue this story I look forward to what you have in store. There's definitely some potential for great story telling with Chanson as a character. I'm curious on whether or not will get some inner monologue from him and how he feels with everything he's going through and how his relationship with his mother Ariel lead him to wanting to find out where he comes from. I agree that Disney doesn't often do the whole mother and son relationship all that much when it comes to their animated films the only one I can think of at the top of my head is Tarzan. Keep up the great work with your story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
2/4 c1 storyteller362
Yep, I was looking for this type of story. Awesome job and can't wait to read more!
Yep, I was looking for this type of story. Awesome job and can't wait to read more!
1/4 c2 Guest
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