7/28 c10 Guest
this is really good, will there be more? You write them all so well, better than the show in places
this is really good, will there be more? You write them all so well, better than the show in places
7/27 c10 mcdonald's duck
Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuck indeed! How could I have missed two updates! (well, one update and then i checked tonight !). So sorry but I'm here and caught up and gotta say again just how GOOD the dialogue is. Have you thought of sending this to the creators? They should see the QUALITY of your writing. It leaps off the screen seriously so well done and sorry again for not coming back sooner i loved the chapter before this too. i try not to reveal too much plot in reviews but I have to say I LOVED the caterpillar cake ref ive been following that on twitter LOL take care x
Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuck indeed! How could I have missed two updates! (well, one update and then i checked tonight !). So sorry but I'm here and caught up and gotta say again just how GOOD the dialogue is. Have you thought of sending this to the creators? They should see the QUALITY of your writing. It leaps off the screen seriously so well done and sorry again for not coming back sooner i loved the chapter before this too. i try not to reveal too much plot in reviews but I have to say I LOVED the caterpillar cake ref ive been following that on twitter LOL take care x
4/13 c8 mcdonald's duck
Hey you're welcome! Thanks for the thanks and thanks a billion trillion for the updates! Had a craaaaaaaazy schedule at work so been super busy sorry but love love loving where you're taking this. I can't get over how GREAT the conversations are. I mean the idea is really good too obvs but the dialog really stands out like youve got inside their minds and awesome job at the welsh. oh and the actions around it all are great too!
Hey you're welcome! Thanks for the thanks and thanks a billion trillion for the updates! Had a craaaaaaaazy schedule at work so been super busy sorry but love love loving where you're taking this. I can't get over how GREAT the conversations are. I mean the idea is really good too obvs but the dialog really stands out like youve got inside their minds and awesome job at the welsh. oh and the actions around it all are great too!