12/30/2020 c4 Koncor the great
No ozpin body catcher wizzerd and the young subtle male body with silver eyes a magical core that replenish's and has infinite potential for growth and potential immortality even if he's not out right evil he would be trying to carry out orchimaru's pedo will on our favorite protagonist.
No ozpin body catcher wizzerd and the young subtle male body with silver eyes a magical core that replenish's and has infinite potential for growth and potential immortality even if he's not out right evil he would be trying to carry out orchimaru's pedo will on our favorite protagonist.
12/30/2020 c1 P34644563
nothing technically wrong with this but it just throws me through a loop when I see the stats sheet of a gamer fanfic MC and the stat allocation slots are just all random it doesn't feel organized. like you have strength right after intelligence. instead of how most fanfics organize these stat sheets example
strength: 8
vitality: 8
dexterity: 14
intelligence: 16
wisdom: 10
charisma :6
luck:8
this is typically how they're organized in fanfics from my experience. unless the author is trying to create his own original gamer system which fails more often than it succeeds . then there's the regenrate HP and MP I feel like you could have just put min short for a minute. also I don't see a level by his name. I just started reading this so I can only draw two conclusions from that one this is one of the gamer fanfics where levels don't exist. or you simply forgot to add a level for the Maine character next to his name.
nothing technically wrong with this but it just throws me through a loop when I see the stats sheet of a gamer fanfic MC and the stat allocation slots are just all random it doesn't feel organized. like you have strength right after intelligence. instead of how most fanfics organize these stat sheets example
strength: 8
vitality: 8
dexterity: 14
intelligence: 16
wisdom: 10
charisma :6
luck:8
this is typically how they're organized in fanfics from my experience. unless the author is trying to create his own original gamer system which fails more often than it succeeds . then there's the regenrate HP and MP I feel like you could have just put min short for a minute. also I don't see a level by his name. I just started reading this so I can only draw two conclusions from that one this is one of the gamer fanfics where levels don't exist. or you simply forgot to add a level for the Maine character next to his name.
12/29/2020 c3 Koncor the great
I would have done the poll but I forgot ff removed the desktop option locking away several features one of which is polls. So yeah sorry.
I would have done the poll but I forgot ff removed the desktop option locking away several features one of which is polls. So yeah sorry.
12/28/2020 c2 tetsujinvinalay
Pick Needler. His space affinity may help in combat, especially that this weapon is based on gravity
Pick Needler. His space affinity may help in combat, especially that this weapon is based on gravity