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7/24 c5 3Purplepotatoblob
awww this is so amazing please update!
7/8 c5 Koharuboshi
I won't ever stop loving depictions of boarding school life. I'm glad Kellie has a group of friends already and that her family all support her. This is very wholesome. Thanks for this chapter!
7/8 c3 Koharuboshi
I am loving all these new pages! I appreciate that you've brought new noble houses to the fore and you haven't made all the kids just copies of their parents. Your writing style is easy to read and you write "school life" well.
7/8 c2 Koharuboshi
I'm enjoying this story. Neal, Yuki, and Kel are in character (I just finished re-reading Protector of the Small) and Kellie is 3-dimensional. I thought the scenes with her sisters were super sweet.

One small thing - it threw me off a bit to hear Kellie referring to Neal and Yuki by their names rather than by "her father and mother" when it seemed you were writing from Kellie's point of view. For example: "Kellie felt her insides do a flop. Yuki couldn't mean to break the news to Neal right now, could she?"

Otherwise I'm excited to read more and see how Tortall and its attitude towards female pages has changed (or not?) in the intervening years since POTS!
4/10 c3 6purplesky24
Great chapter! Oooo I'm excited to see the mix of pages! Goldenlake and even Aly's daughter! I like Cassius, and how protective Pathom is of him - it makes so much sense that Raoul would make it a point to have his son make friends with Cassius and visit Tirragen as much as he can. And Merric as the training master! Good for him (and for Kellie, I'd imagine)! Great update!
2/16 c2 6karameiwaku
Howdy! I love it so far! I can't wait for more!

I think Kellie is preparing herself very well and I hope she meets a great group of year mates.

This year has been rough for a lot of reasons. I hope things start looking up for you.
2/16 c2 6purplesky24
Great chapter! Love the detailed glimpse into the Queenscove family life. Kellie's relationship with her sisters is so sweet! And I'm glad that Neal realised very quickly what a folly it would be to object to Kellie's decision, ha. And good to know that she'll be going in rather prepared (as much as she can be, I guess).

And I totally get the whole metal health and low motivation to write thing. Take all the time you need 3
1/15 c1 2bookworm1992
I really like your style! I’m excited to see where this story goes.
1/9 c1 6purplesky24
This is a fantastic start! Very well written, and I love all the details! Love that Tobe and Irnai are Kel's foster children and traveling with her, the mentions of Ander's second daughter saying she wants to try for her shield and the very-Kel reaction. I love that Kelanna is Kellie's full name, such a great way to honour the two lady knights who also happen to play important roles in her parents' lives. I do wonder how she feel about being named after the first two lady knights in centuries? If she feels any pressure at all? Can't wait to find out!

Great start, looking forward to more!
1/9 c1 Thewearybiblofile
I love this ideacan't wait for more

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