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31m c32 21A Talking Cat
At that age, at least where I am, they say don't use soap on babies' skin since it's bad for them, and commented specifically on baby shampoo. I dunno, may be different over there, but just a thought. Also, 20 days old for first bath? Surely the nurse has already shown them in the first few days? What they advise is every 2-3 days, fewer in winter. Again, this is where I live rather than over there. But just a few thoughts.
8/2 c24 Magsluvsaragorn
A note on Degrassi; the show actually originated in the 80s with Degrassi Jr. High, then Degrassi High. Next Generation was NOT the original. The 80s shows were much better.
7/31 c32 Guest
It’s a good chapter you hint at danger to come, Reading it one Hass to assume that when they go to the store in the morning they’re going to get paparazzi or something at the start. Keep up the good work. - Nell
7/31 c32 Lils
Oh thank god they didnt fire him

I rly enjoy this story & im very excited for the next chapter! Hope u have a lovely day/night, and thx for writing! x
7/30 c32 3DW.618
That media storm sure is rough on all of them! Good thing he didn't lose his job!
7/25 c31 ThatOneGirl
Okay, I'm going to be that person and ask, because google had nothing for me. What in the world is a fresnel? A plant? A fringe? A word for a butterfly's wings that I don't know? The only thing I've found is a type of lens that apparently applies to lighthouses — which, considering the Glen St Mary lighthouse, makes sense, but I don't think it could flutter...

Okay, that confusion aside, great story. I like how you develop the characters, make them all very believable, and while Rilla is obviously too young for Ken now, in five years, why not? (Which, of course, is what happens in the books!) The discussion and deciding of the baby's name made me smile, though I'm not crazy about Owen as a girl's name (anymore than I am about most names that could be used for either sex, but that's me) — Elowen is super cool though. And Anne and Gilbert's no nonsense approach to it all, including a bit of tough love when needed, is great. Can't wait to see what the next twist is... ohh, those nasty media rant people should all be caged with pens that don't write and paper that shreds as soon as you look at it. And cameras with no battery.
7/24 c31 Guest
Happy Birthday! Good cliff hanger! - Nell
7/23 c29 ebrillblaiddes
SOUP TUREEN REFERENCE

LOL I'M SCREAMING

You scared my cats
7/20 c30 Lils
Had a look and to my delight there were another two chapters! I love this story, ur very talanted and i will be checking this story regularly from now on! :D
7/18 c30 Guest
Lovely chapter! - Nell
7/10 c29 Andrea1984
I like this story so best. I girl. Wow. I hope the best for the small family.

Cu

Andrea
7/7 c28 Lils
Okay im just SO excited for what happens next! Please, please dont end this story!
7/4 c28 Guest
Wow, I like the chapter so much.
And I hole the best for Rilla, the baby and Ken.

Cu

Andrea
7/2 c28 Rosa
I loved this! Please please please don't end the story here!
7/1 c28 21A Talking Cat
I loved this chapter! I was waiting for the labour chapter the whole way through :P and want to see what happens next!
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