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8/10 c15 a.rina.93.arina
I love your story and the great ending I guess!
8/8 c12 Number Ten
I understand the dangers of what Taylor did, but technically, the Titanic is still going to sink, loophole of the highest order. It does show that Taylor cares and was forced into a situation that he didn’t deserve. I’m just scared of what’s going to happen next to him. I really don’t want him to die or go to jail forever. Prometheus has a good balance too. He’s not outwardly evil, just a stickler for the rules and trying to avoid bad things, it’s just that I want to route for Taylor more. But he does give Taylor time to run. I’m both nervous and excited for the last chapter
3/29 c10 Josie Robbie
Ohh no the ship's going to sink! It's really sad, I was hoping so much that Taylor would be able to avert the disaster somehow but Prometheus interfered and ruined all his carefully laid plans, the ship struck the iceberg and now everything's ruined. Ohh my God why did he have to do that? I was so mad when he incapacitated Mr. Andrews and then attacked Taylor.

Poor Taylor's so alone in all of this and he's working so hard for a good cause and trying to do right by everyone without hurting anyone in the process, but he's still human and it's a lot of pressure to carry the responsibility of saving so many lives on one's shoulders. Inspite of the high tech gadgets, he can only do so much while being stuck in a different timeline without any help and so many complex problems and moral questions keep on arising. The suspense is killing me, I can't wait to see what happens next. Ohh and by the way, I like the subtle changes from the movie that you made, especially in Jack and Rose's relationship. Jack's plan was sensible and carried weight but I'm so glad Rose chose not to go back and stay with him after all. I just hope Jack doesn't get falsely accused of stealing the necklace and arrested like in the movie.
3/10 c10 Number Ten
A real rollercoaster of a chapter. I don’t know who is more right. I love how morally ambiguous your story is. You connections make you want to do the right thing but messing with fate And time itself is another problem altogether. I hope Taylor thinks of something
2/7 c8 Josie Robbie
I feel so sad for poor Taylor. He's got such an enormous responsibility of so many people's lives on his shoulders and he's practically on his own since Prometheus isn't exactly helping and Jack doesn't know what's going to happen. I really hope his pray gets answered. By the way, on the brighter side, I'm so happy to see that the moment I've been waiting for happened. Jack and Rose finally got together! Also I really liked the way you've shown Trudy's character. She's such a supportive friend to Rose, like Taylor is to Jack. I think the exciting parts are coming up now and I can't wait to see what happens next!
2/3 c8 Number Ten
God I feel for Taylor here. Caught we between a rock and a hard place. I don’t know if I could live with a decision like this. You’ve rocked the last couple chapters, portraying the turmoil but also changing my perspective on Prometheus.
2/3 c6 Number Ten
Ruth’s reasons while still vain and selfish there is some logic there and emotion.
2/2 c5 Number Ten
I feel awful for Taylor
2/2 c3 Number Ten
Taylor seems like a Doctor Who Time Lord. Timely Wimey stuff
2/2 c2 Number Ten
Is Kyle Craig Prometheus? You have me hooked
1/17 c6 Josie Robbie
Ohh that flashback scene of Jack meeting Taylor for the first time was so touching. I'm so glad they got each other as travelling companions. I like the way Taylor selflessly has his back in every situation and gives helpful advice and guidance. Also it was interesting to see more of Ruth's character and see a more emotional side to her.
1/17 c5 Josie Robbie
Wow that conversation between Taylor and Prometheus was intense. Lots of unexpected twists and new information was revealed. Poor Taylor, he's under so much pressure, I hope he makes the correct choice. Now that the misunderstandings have been cleared, I hope Prometheus doesn't desert him. I loved the third class party scene and the deleted scene you added where they're stargazing. The additional dialogues and thoughts have made it more beautiful.
1/9 c4 Guest
really like this story i've never read something like this before
1/8 c4 Josie Robbie
I'm very interested in the big conversation coming up between Taylor and Prometheus. Ohh and I'm so excited for the upcoming party in the third class too! I liked Taylor's inputs in the dining scene and the way he kept backing Jack up, I'd like to know more about his family. Also you've nicely portrayed the friendly relationship between Rose and Trudy through their interactions. I love the way Jack and Rose's chemistry is developing.
1/7 c4 3queentanic
this is a great story
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