3/9 c8 60wuemsel
That was a really interesting idea and very well executed. Kudos! Poor Bones, man, i just wanted to hug him. Also, this Barrows lady's got no taste. :p
Thanks for posting, I enjoyed it a lot.:)
That was a really interesting idea and very well executed. Kudos! Poor Bones, man, i just wanted to hug him. Also, this Barrows lady's got no taste. :p
Thanks for posting, I enjoyed it a lot.:)
3/7 c8 Honey
I like that there were all those apologies and that their friendships endured. Good story!
I like that there were all those apologies and that their friendships endured. Good story!
2/25 c7 22C Dashwood
Ha, well done Spock, she has revealed herself at last. Poor Bones but at least he now knows the truth. His best friend didn't take his girl.
Ha, well done Spock, she has revealed herself at last. Poor Bones but at least he now knows the truth. His best friend didn't take his girl.
2/24 c7 Honey
Well, I was wondering how Spock figured it out? And how did Anita figure out that Spock and Captain Kirk were on to him? I for one am glad to see her go!
Well, I was wondering how Spock figured it out? And how did Anita figure out that Spock and Captain Kirk were on to him? I for one am glad to see her go!
2/22 c6 C Dashwood
This story is brilliant. Please continue it soon if you can. I'm not even a Mc Coy fan but poor baby.
Kirk, send that bitch to City alpha 5.
This story is brilliant. Please continue it soon if you can. I'm not even a Mc Coy fan but poor baby.
Kirk, send that bitch to City alpha 5.
2/13 c6 Honey
She needs to morph into her real being. I was thinking of the wicked witch yelling, " I'm melting, I'm melting!". Anita's time to melt.
She needs to morph into her real being. I was thinking of the wicked witch yelling, " I'm melting, I'm melting!". Anita's time to melt.
2/7 c5 Honey
Boy is she a wack job. He should have questioned that she was "perfect" in that bikini! Will you have her show her real self?
Boy is she a wack job. He should have questioned that she was "perfect" in that bikini! Will you have her show her real self?
2/3 c4 Honey
I sure do not like this "woman".
I sure do not like this "woman".
1/24 c2 Guest
The story unfolds at a fast pace , so you can enjoy the story and visualize every bit Fan of the old Star Trek
The story unfolds at a fast pace , so you can enjoy the story and visualize every bit Fan of the old Star Trek
1/23 c3 Honey
This is a good story. And you are correct, no one would laugh if it was the other way around. No one has the right to disrespect each other that way. I suspect, though, that there is nastier behavior in store!
This is a good story. And you are correct, no one would laugh if it was the other way around. No one has the right to disrespect each other that way. I suspect, though, that there is nastier behavior in store!
1/9 c1 gabumon7
Premise of thevstoru seems like an interesting idea. The jump to a date seems forced though as too quick for the 1st chapter. McCoy seems more the go over to the person by them selves and chat before assuming to date
Premise of thevstoru seems like an interesting idea. The jump to a date seems forced though as too quick for the 1st chapter. McCoy seems more the go over to the person by them selves and chat before assuming to date
1/6 c1 Lori
The Love Bomb! Cool title...Looking forward to the next chapter.
The Love Bomb! Cool title...Looking forward to the next chapter.