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8/2 c17 Luv reading 67
Mixed feelings for Lucy and Chris,,,
How will Vin take to Chris turning up in town too..
Good chapter, looking forward to the next chapter
8/2 c17 Guest
Thank you. How quietly romantic.
7/29 c16 32MusesOwnMyMind
So I am still compromised over the kitten. STILL. And am strongly considering changing my username to something in that regard, even though only people who read this story will understand what the heck it means. But now you go and add in Gal, and I'm compromised all over again. (*muted grumbling*) I get the sneaking feeling that maybe, just maybe, getting poor Gal to calm down and trust Lucy (and Chris?) might be yet another thing that brings them closer together (and gets Lucy to start trusting Chris more as a result?) I most definitely did not miss the small comparison Chris made on handling skittish horses vs. handing a skittish Lucy. And I really hope that I'm not the only one that was a little bit sad when Chris opted for putting his shirt back on (what? I don't think it's a stretch to assume Lucy enjoyed what she saw, lol!) But if I am alone in that, I suppose I will survive ;).

Do I detect a teeny, tiny hint of jealousy from Chris, now that he temporarily doesn't have Lucy to himself, too? I think I do ;). And I am not entirely certain I'm on the right track, here, but I'm going to just barge ahead and say it anyway. Are we perhaps looking at the start of some small seeds of tension that will eventually rise up between Chris and Vin? Am I terrible for hoping that we are? Yes? I suppose I can live with that, too.
7/26 c16 Guest
Not sure how this will work out but looking forward to finding out.
Enjoying this very much.
Thank you for sharing your work.
7/24 c16 Guest
Aww so many thoughts and feelings milling around for all of them,,,hope Lucy will eventually get to relax in Chris’s company,,so pleased Vin got her horse back for her..
Will Chris let her go in the paddock to reconnect with her horse though,,or will he want to be there to try to help,,
What will happen when Eli Joe gets closer, will all the boys get together to finish him off...
Hope you muse keeps up..lol
7/23 c16 Guest
I absolutely love this story. Chris will be sorry to see Lucy go. Thanks
7/17 c15 Guest
Oh. I want to shake Chris,,make him go to Lucy and try harder to talk to her,, and Lucy just needs more reassurance that he won’t harm her,,,
Will that help her when Vin brings back her pony..and she has something else to care for
7/16 c15 MusesOwnMyMind
Alright, you may as well consider this revenge for Sam's latest chapter, because WOW am I ever a mess right now. I managed to pull myself together (barely) after diving face-first into the swamp of feels that was reading about Vin seeing Lucy's old horse and kidnapping (er...horsenapping?) it to take back to her. I mean yes, he also managed to slow Eli Joe's progress down even more, but I don't think any of us really believe that Lucy wasn't his primary motivation there, getting back the one thing that she really loved before Eli Joe stole it away. So yes, I've scraped myself together somewhat, to happily march along to the next segment of the chapter, and then...

THE KITTEN.

I'm a big sucker for any idea of tiny, helpless little fluffy animals anyway. But throw in ordinarily gruff, hardened men interacting in a completely gentle and non-threatening way with said helpless little fluffy animal and I'm basically going to turn into a puddle on the ground. AND THEN you go ahead, and make Lucy see this gentleness to Chris, and give us a little glimpse of her thoughts on that gentleness and how mayyyybe she's starting to realize she doesn't *have* to be so scared of him, and I'm a goner. Don't get me wrong, I adore how she still acts on instinct sometimes, even with this new proof, flinching or stepping away and/or averting her eyes, because she's not just going to forget about all of that in a day. But even just the tiniest sliver of a hint that it might get better between Lucy and Chris has me over here grinning so much my cheeks hurt.

I really don't think I have any composure left to me to really do the whole Lucy/Inez/Mary interaction true justice because I loved that entire scenario as well! That Inez and Mary are trying so hard to make sure Lucy knows she has *someone* in her corner is just so heartwarming, and I think Lucy might just be starting to realize that she can trust them, even if it's not completely coming through in her actions just yet (there's still some hesitation there, and that's very reasonable! But I am picking up on her reactions, watching them ride away as an example, that she's starting to possibly consider them as her friends?) And of course Mary's tiny little bit of allowing herself to think of Vin? I was right back to squealing and flailing around, so consider yourself avenged if you thought I have ever compromised you at any stage in the game ;). A very successful job indeed ;)
6/25 c14 MusesOwnMyMind
Agh! I don't even know how to frame words into a sentence properly right now, because I spent the first half of this chapter giddy at Lucy's reaction to the soap, to the looks she kept shooting Chris and his reaction to them (Chris Larabee not quite sure what to do with himself or how to interpret the looks as a whole has got to be one of the very best things I've ever seen). And then you throw in him walking in on her in her state of undress (cough), and I was over the moon with the poor girl's embarrassment, and Chris trying to scrape himself together to salvage the situation without making it worse (not that it really worked out that way). I think you've probably figured out by now that I'm a sucker for those sorts of things, where a potential future "couple" is thrown into a situation where one of them sees the other more than a little indisposed. And this just played right into my evil little hands ;).

But just when I was starting to recover myself from all of that, you go and you throw heartache for Nathan my way, and whoops, I'm compromised yet again and back to square one on incoherency mountain (I have a summer home there...) I love, love, LOVE his entire interaction with Lucy, trying to get her to see that at least one of the men Vin is associated with knows what she's been through, or at least has a better idea even without her having to go into all the details just yet. And somehow it meant even more that he was struggling with talking about his mother's experience, and maybe wasn't even really ready to with *anyone* and yet there he was, trying, because he knew how uncomfortable Lucy really was trying to hold her own amidst all the trauma she's suffered. I can't wait to see those two get a bit closer, if that's what you have in mind. And if you wanted to have me spending the rest of the day as an incoherent puddle of emotional goo for Nathan, well, you succeeded ;)
6/19 c14 finabin
Ok Buck or Nathan(anyone) should be able to tell Chris to COURT his wife. Dangnabbit he was already married he should realize that his wife needs to know what he's feeling, thinking, or doing. Maybe Ezra should bring the ladies out to visit so he can offer advice to both Larabees. Or shove Vin in some manure and tell him to open his eyes to how Lucy is acting. Yes she needs protection but throwing her back into a situation where she is terrified isnt going to help. Dang STUPID, ARROGANT, KNOW IT ALL'S. You dont make a scared, in shock, abused woman and force her to marry a morose, angry, non talkative , anti social, self centered( my wife and son were murdered, no one else has has tragedy happen to them) putz. CHRIS LARABEE get your head out of your butt and really think about how Lucy would be feeling . Good thought with the soap now try something else. Maybe ask her if she would like something to read or if she can sew maybe ask her to make you a new shirt, non black. Ask Vin if she is good with animals. Ask her to help you with the horses, show her that you value her and her opinion.
6/19 c14 Guest
God, age old feelings, but not being able to speak about them is so hard,,,
I just want to push this story along so I can see some happiness for them all, they deserve it..
But no doubt there will be twists and turns to tug at my heart before that
6/12 c1 Guest
Please don’t keep us in suspense too much longer. I am really enjoying this story and SO want to find out what will happen.
Thank you for taking the time to share your talents.
6/11 c13 Luvreading67
Slowly, slowly...
But hopefully not slowly adding new chapters...lol
6/11 c12 Luvreading67
When will Chris soften his demeanour towards Lucy,, they both have personal issues to deal with,
Hope he comes up with some way to get her to relax a bit more and see him for himself, and how his past. Is affecting him too
6/11 c11 Luvreading67
Poor girl,,and Chris
It’s like I want to shout at her to see that Chris cares, and he’s not going to hurt her
I love being involved in a story...lol
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