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10/9/2020 c1 fanfictionjla
can we get more blind royai? roy got to visit ed afyer that letter. i bet he would be harsh but also caring maybe even worried when he sees him again
9/13/2020 c1 2shoelaces
i love these little snippets of those two together, also I like reading newly blind roy...
Well done, I thought they were very in character
9/1/2020 c1 Etta Daring
FLAWLESS FLAWLESS FLAWLESS FLAWLESS OH OH MY HEART HURT SO BAD READING THIS I LOVE IT
6/17/2020 c1 2Marinara the Sauce
Bittersweet. Fitting for their relationship, due to the fraternization laws *glares at whoever made that rule*
6/16/2020 c1 162Griselda Banks
I don't know why you're so nervous about Royai, because you write it excellently! This was full of the sweet but passionate, understated LONGING that I love so much about Royai. My absolute favorite part, which I love to itty bitty bits and pieces, is Hawkeye saying, "I will wait for you as long as it takes. But I will not settle for half of what we should have. I will wait until I can have all of it." *swoons* You get it. You totally get it. Ugh, so beautiful TT
6/14/2020 c1 kagomeinu18
You did great! I love it!
All of you're stories have not disappointed me in the slightest bit, only to give me something to keep my spirits lifted and something to look forward to!
Stop selling yourself short!
Please continue with whatever story you wish to update or create!
God bless you rein
6/12/2020 c1 5Id9916
I loved this piece! Roy and Riza felt very in-character to me, both so stubborn about not being helped from the other even when it's clear they need it. And I adore that Ed's letter was the catharsis, it made for a funny turn.
Thank you so much for writing it!
6/12/2020 c1 emmahoshi
lol ed's letter is the highlight of this story , i love how he wanted to invoke the invitation and i could never see that last paragraph coming wow brilliant way to corner the colonel hahaha, I normally only read parental ed/roy but this was quite enjoyable thanks
6/11/2020 c1 19la-hija-de-Dios
Oh, my word! Yeeeeeeeeees! :3 This is a work of art! :D Thank you so much! *squees*

As a side note, you missed an e in the word “envelope” at the end of, like, the third chapter.

I can’t wait to read the others! My response might be sporadic because I’m heading to a camp today to be a counselor there for the summer. I’ll get to your stories as soon as possible, though! :D Thanks again!
6/11/2020 c1 Guest
This made me grin IRL so much. I love love love it
6/11/2020 c1 9manga.geek.3
Love this! I think you've done exceedingly well at keeping those two in character. You've definitely got a knack for it.

My question is... where in the world are you coming to the knowledge that it's royai week? Or even edwin week? I see people post those all the time and I just cannot figure it out xD

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