5/31 c5 AllySan
Me ha encantado tu historia.
Al leerla traducida en forma automática por la página, creo haber perdido parte del encanto, pero aun así, la he disfrutado.
Muchas gracias.
Sigue escribiendo!
Me ha encantado tu historia.
Al leerla traducida en forma automática por la página, creo haber perdido parte del encanto, pero aun así, la he disfrutado.
Muchas gracias.
Sigue escribiendo!
6/15/2020 c5 Guest
Great story. The angst. Sad to see it’s end. I wish you’d continue it but if there are other ideas I would gladly read them all. Thank you.
Great story. The angst. Sad to see it’s end. I wish you’d continue it but if there are other ideas I would gladly read them all. Thank you.
6/13/2020 c5 ZappyZappy
I really enjoyed it! I wrote a couple other reveiws and they didn't show up, but at any rate, it was a lovely story. The scene with Jane running through the forest in the wedding dress was dramatic. The reunion was furfilling- with the mutual anxiety and the teasing. St. John's actions and his Justification was in character, but infuriating. I'd definitely be interested in another story in the same vein. Thanks for posting!
I really enjoyed it! I wrote a couple other reveiws and they didn't show up, but at any rate, it was a lovely story. The scene with Jane running through the forest in the wedding dress was dramatic. The reunion was furfilling- with the mutual anxiety and the teasing. St. John's actions and his Justification was in character, but infuriating. I'd definitely be interested in another story in the same vein. Thanks for posting!
6/13/2020 c5 hariharu
Your story is so amazing! As I read this, I cried and felt really happy! Thank you for sharing your amazing work!
Your story is so amazing! As I read this, I cried and felt really happy! Thank you for sharing your amazing work!
6/12/2020 c5 yuktabhatti
Thank you for finishing it so quickly. A beautiful re imagining of the original ending. Feels a bit more realistic. And it's definitely a yes for you to write more endings. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.
Thank you for finishing it so quickly. A beautiful re imagining of the original ending. Feels a bit more realistic. And it's definitely a yes for you to write more endings. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.
6/12/2020 c4 Guest
It’s one of the best stories out there. Poor Rochester. I’m on the edge of my seat. Please update soon. Thank you and take care.
It’s one of the best stories out there. Poor Rochester. I’m on the edge of my seat. Please update soon. Thank you and take care.
6/12/2020 c4 57hiddenhibernian
I'm very glad you don't keep us waiting too long between chapters, because the suspense is unbearable! Thanks for writing :)
I'm very glad you don't keep us waiting too long between chapters, because the suspense is unbearable! Thanks for writing :)
6/11/2020 c3 ZappyZappy
oh man, I hope she doesn't marry St. John. He's just so controlling and petty. Writing to Mr Rochester just to hurt him... dang. Rochester's and Jane's conversation was painful but not surprising, knowing their characters. Can't wait for the next update! The tension is high! The upcoming conversation between Rochester and St. John should be good, As they are pretty much opposites of each other. Not to mention that St. John doesn't even love Jane.
oh man, I hope she doesn't marry St. John. He's just so controlling and petty. Writing to Mr Rochester just to hurt him... dang. Rochester's and Jane's conversation was painful but not surprising, knowing their characters. Can't wait for the next update! The tension is high! The upcoming conversation between Rochester and St. John should be good, As they are pretty much opposites of each other. Not to mention that St. John doesn't even love Jane.
6/11/2020 c3 Couch potato
Please update quickly. I am dying to see their reunion. Also if I didn't hate St John before I do now. I hope Jane questions him about the letter.
Please update quickly. I am dying to see their reunion. Also if I didn't hate St John before I do now. I hope Jane questions him about the letter.
6/11/2020 c3 ZappyZappy
the suspense is killing me! God forbid she marry St. John. The guy honestly creeps me out he's so controlliny of Jane. I wouldn't be surprised if he did something bad.
the suspense is killing me! God forbid she marry St. John. The guy honestly creeps me out he's so controlliny of Jane. I wouldn't be surprised if he did something bad.