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3/7 c24 gin-san
Jun Yayoi es pareja mas linda de la serie
muy linda historia y un final muy hermosa,Espero todo lo mejor para MatsuYoshi y MisakiAzumi.
1/10 c24 ActiveX
I love this ending, beautiful fanfic!
12/16/2020 c24 Nina
Your fic is very cool! I want an ending like that for every canon couple. I really love JunYayoi! (I hope Taro and Azumi can become a good couple in the future too!)
Ps: Have u watched Rise of New Champions? Misugi is very good at English so umm... I think learning some Spanish is not a problem for a genius like him.:D
10/17/2020 c24 Phanteas Mircea
Hola.

Tu fic es bueno. Me parece que merece mucha mas atención de la que tiene. Llevas una buena redacción y mantienes los hechos interesantes. Sería genial que pudieras continuarlo, y también que valiera, que lo que has escrito ya: tuviera su debida atención.. porque merece mucho, mucho más.

Suerte!
10/10/2020 c24 25AzureKnight2008
What a beautiful last chapter and happy open endings for our main couples, my friend!

Jun's first ever statement directed at Yayoi under the Madrid sky was the BEST thing I could ever hope for in CT world, probably in the future after Rising Sun Arc. I must say THANK YOU to you, from the bottom of my heart, for creating this wondeful scene and possible future for my eternal idol and favorite couple. Thank you for thinking of Jun's greatest dream and make him realize in your fic. ;-;

I notice you didn't mention the heavy injury Jun suffered after taking the full force of Schneider's direct Jumping Fire Volley. The Prince has gotten stronger than ever and that impresses me so much. :') Then again, the battle isn't over yet and if you already read the latest chapter 112-113-114, you will see that Kaltz the schemer was forced to leave the field when his rib injuries got worse. To be honest, I can never stop worrying about Jun until the final whistle arrives in December. I hope nothing bad will happen to him in the last 6 additional minutes. Yayoi is still waiting for him. :'(

Speaking of which, why do you always depict HikaruxYoshiko so sweet in your work? XD I find it very suitable because beside TsubasaxSanae and KojiroxMaki, they are a CT couple that is blessed with the minimum drama ever since World Youth Arc. So only JunxYayoi is being maltreated, I must admit... u_u

Nevertheless, I think the future you drew for TaroxAzumi is just perfect! Taro returned to France to play for PSG with Azumi being by his side as his official girlfriend. Absolutely sweet! If Takahashi-sensei happens to come across your fic, I'd be happy if he can take some of your key ideas centering on this couple into consideration. :D

CONGRATULATIONS FOR SUCH WONDERFUL EXPERIENCES YOU GAVE US READERS, my talented writer! I'd love to read more from you in the future, but please only write when you feel like it or whenever it is convenient for you. I truly treasure your work.

ARIGATOU GOZAIMASHITA! Take care n Hope to see you soon! *bearhugs**
10/9/2020 c23 AzureKnight2008
I was listening to some epic battle music of my own choice while writing my reviews to you. They helped boost the mood for the second half of this match! I admit it was so intense that it took several of my breath away. Your narration style ROCKS! XD

I love your revision to allow Genzo to show up in the family area along with the girls and their boyfriends' families respectively. Once again, you have created a wonderfully intense atmosphere not only for the ongoing battle but also for the present spectators and our Samurai Blue fighting on the field. I understand that 3M and especially Taro is the brightest star of GD23 Arc but the way you gave courtesy to other secondary characters is definitely the greatest thing I've always wanted to see from CT Manga. I love Jun's calmness under pressure and the way he calmed Hikaru just in time against the provocation of the Australian players and encouraged the whole team to focus on their battle. Taro definitely experienced the greatest growth in playstyle and mental ever since World Youth Arc and finally, he could become a truly independant soldier of the Golden Age worthy of the nickname given to him: The Artist of the Field. EPIC! X'D

Aww... I find the last scene very beautiful. For once, Jun & Yayoi decided to throw away all the formalities and etiquette to fully enjoy each other's presence amidst this state of euphoria. In fact, they should have been given more moments like this, my friend, please let them be more open around each other because JunxYayoi is technically the FIRST official couple in CT. They shouldn't have lost to HikaruxYoshiko in terms of sweetness, you know. :'D Oh, and Taro finally DID IT by giving Azumi such a sweet kiss in front of their friends and supporters. Nice move, Taro! Azumi deserved to be acknowledged. ;)

CONGRATS for such a wonderful match! **V-sign**
10/9/2020 c22 AzureKnight2008
Hi dear,

I'm here again to give you my thought about the most interesting match of the whole GD23 Arc ~Japan vs Australia~ as I simply think it has caught my best interest mainly because as you said: this was the only one occasion in which All-Japan actually lost to one of its strongest opponents on World Stage! :)

You narrated the first half of the match wonderfully, my talented friend. I feel really bad for the Tachibana brothers and their sacrifice, but since there's no one else beside them who can execute such an awesome technique perfectly and since Japan must secure the first point as fast as possible so that they can destroy Australia's game plan... there're no other options. Their parting gift was invaluable and the twin brothers could feel proud of their great contribution to the team's final success.

Well, putting the tension aside, I love those little scenes you wrote about other characters, particularly the girls' group message round by Azumi in which Sanae was also involved in the chatting and being teased by Yayoi. Genzo's texting with Schneider also earned a good laugh from me. You've made them perfectly in character! Well done! :')

Oh, in case you're wondering about why Genzo couldn't play, his eye injury wasn't completely healed after that AWAY match against Australia. A good eyesight is a GK's important asset. As a result, the best he could do is to cheer for his teammates from the bench. ;)
10/9/2020 c24 Falldios
es maravilloso. amo tanto el final
10/1/2020 c24 22Lavender 0002
Uepon: Muchas gracias! Yo también los adoro, son geniales, ? a que si?

Valerie: Muchas gracias! Aun no se si escribiré más, tengo una medio idea concebida que pasaría en champions, pero tengo bastante trabajo ahora. Así que no puedo prometer nada.

Mikita: Thanks you! I have a idea for a new fic, that would be continue this history ( our guys in Europe), but I dont have any time to writte, so I cant to promise nothing.

Nerd: ohh! Thanks you! so nice! Misaki will playing in PSG, yes ( I adore Taro, and I dont like so much this club, but I think that it is te club where Misaki going to play in the manga in the future) His love stoy with azumi will continue in Paris, althougt step by step ( Taro is Taro... you know), Yoshiko and Matsuyama will be very happy in their married, and Misugi and Yayoi will continue fighting as forever, and will be happy.
Maybe, I going to writte a new history to continue that.

Blah: !?Gracias!
9/30/2020 c24 Blah
?Amo la historia! :(
9/30/2020 c24 Nerd
You wrote well. Have been following you from the start and it was worth it. The future of the 3M is so brilliantly written i admit. Will Misaki be playing for PSG and start to love with Azumi from now onwards? It wasn't mentioned so just ask. Matsu and Yoshiko obviously planned their wedding and it is good, but Misugi and Yayoi.. darnit make sure to make her happy for the rest of your life JUN-SAMA!
9/21/2020 c24 Mikita
I love your fic and so sad it ends, but you will write again in the future right? you have created a wonderful future for the 3M. we hope they will be successful like Tsubasa did. great fic!
9/15/2020 c24 Valerie
?Oh Dios mío! por favor escriba más.
este capitulo estuvo lleno de sentimiento :'(
9/15/2020 c24 Uepon
Tu historia es asombrosa conmovedora y genial. Buena escritora.
Adoro mucho a Misugi, Misaki y Matsuyama.:3
9/10/2020 c1 agosmarisol2006
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