7/21 c22 milagro yuval
Love this story but I think it was too much making Rose losing a baby for the second time around!
Love this story but I think it was too much making Rose losing a baby for the second time around!
7/6 c21 3queentanic
As someone who avoids wedding scenes as much as they can, I must congratulate you on writing an incredible one. Seriously, vows are so stressful and difficult to write well (while being true to the characters), but you've done it.
I love this chapter so much. It's just so fluffy, with all the adorable Jack/Rose/Josie scenes. But I also love how even while it's a happy chapter, there are moments of sadness or pain. The one moment where Rose is asked about having another baby, the one where Jack and Rose are asked about Titanic - all of those moments are written SO well. Congrats on another amazing chapter!
As someone who avoids wedding scenes as much as they can, I must congratulate you on writing an incredible one. Seriously, vows are so stressful and difficult to write well (while being true to the characters), but you've done it.
I love this chapter so much. It's just so fluffy, with all the adorable Jack/Rose/Josie scenes. But I also love how even while it's a happy chapter, there are moments of sadness or pain. The one moment where Rose is asked about having another baby, the one where Jack and Rose are asked about Titanic - all of those moments are written SO well. Congrats on another amazing chapter!
1/13 c20 1Miss Elizabeth Dawson Maybank
This is unlike any other traditional Jack lives story but one of the best and original! Rose's miscarriage...it broke my heart...and Josie is such a cutie!
This is unlike any other traditional Jack lives story but one of the best and original! Rose's miscarriage...it broke my heart...and Josie is such a cutie!
1/1 c20 Number Ten
Josie is a ball of energy. Rose really must be careful, kids pick up words like a sponge. I’m glad Rose is beginning to heal. The trauma and sadness is something to be talked about and worked through together and with help
Josie is a ball of energy. Rose really must be careful, kids pick up words like a sponge. I’m glad Rose is beginning to heal. The trauma and sadness is something to be talked about and worked through together and with help
1/2 c20 5cl3mm
The way you portrayed the beginnings of Rose’s healing process throughout this chapter was so captivating. I’m glad to see her healing, but I must say (again) that I’m getting worried with the war drawing nearer...
The way you portrayed the beginnings of Rose’s healing process throughout this chapter was so captivating. I’m glad to see her healing, but I must say (again) that I’m getting worried with the war drawing nearer...
1/1 c20 3queentanic
i’m so envious of the way you write. it’s so beautiful and seems so effortless. although this was a rather sad chapter, it made me happy to see jack caring for rose throughout everything she’s gone through and ruth supporting her daughter. hope you update this soon!
i’m so envious of the way you write. it’s so beautiful and seems so effortless. although this was a rather sad chapter, it made me happy to see jack caring for rose throughout everything she’s gone through and ruth supporting her daughter. hope you update this soon!
12/18/2020 c19 48Number Ten
It's been a very sad chapter. I did like that Josie says she's not afraid and wants to help her Mommy.
It's been a very sad chapter. I did like that Josie says she's not afraid and wants to help her Mommy.
12/17/2020 c1 liaxame
Ohh my God!
This is for sure the best fanfic I ever read in my life! It’s amazing, I love it!
Ohh my God!
This is for sure the best fanfic I ever read in my life! It’s amazing, I love it!