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12/29/2020 c22 1ReachDidItToEm
Fine, I'll do it
12/29/2020 c22 Ares897
I don't remember if I already said this before or if I forgot, but someone should make a drawing somewhere, on deviantart or actually any place in the internet, of Sohm Bir's Zealot Armor. Not me, because I couldn't draw even if it was needed to save my life.
And again, great work. I can't wait for next chapter.
Happy New year! (in a few days).
12/29/2020 c22 DentingZero4
Sorry I'm a bit late to the party. Been busy lately and forgot to make a comment. Anyways, love the chapter and can't wait for the next one. I also love how you use actual lesser known characters from other Halo media like the novels. I didn't realize that Yar was an actual character until I looked her name up on Halopedia out of curiosity. It's all those little details like that which connect the plot in a masterful way that is just amazing, and is just another one of the many reasons why I love this fanfic. Keep up the amazing work. :D

P.S.
When I first noticed this story, I honestly thought at first that it would be another garbage SI story with terrible grammar, a bad plot, and/or would never be updated (not saying all are bad but a lot are). Your story not only met my expectations, but has greatly exceeded them. Love your work. :D
12/25/2020 c1 I Am Confusion
Loving it... keep up the good work
12/25/2020 c22 4Dovahkiin795
(I write down my actual thoughts)

Sohm trying to speak English was so amusing to read. It would be difficult with a different mouth structure and vocal cords. But it can happen.

Aris trying to hook up Sohm was a funny bit to read.
12/25/2020 c22 Blaze1992
Please nothing cause a foul up or at least till the human's know at the start not all of the convie's are murderous idiots.
12/25/2020 c22 anon
Sohm trying to say hello in English is... kind of adorable to be honest
12/24/2020 c22 A Very Lazy Guy
I’m so hyped for the next chapter I’ve read this chapter almost three times already. Can’t wait to see more!
12/24/2020 c22 Grimmsas
love it but I'm starting to dislike Aris looking forward too the next one
12/24/2020 c22 magik
pls continue
12/24/2020 c22 1HypotheticallyTrue
chapter good
12/24/2020 c22 Allthingsconsidered99
Damn man nice job getting yourself a laptop and great job on the story. Didn't know who you were gonna introduce there at the end but love it anyway and can't wait. If I find any errors I'll pm you so you know I'll probably do it later though gotta go through some moving and what not. Anyway hope you and everyone is safe enjoy them holidays and play destiny to your hearts content.
12/24/2020 c22 Ares897
I can't believe you gave us another chapter on CHRISTMAS! Such a great gift you gave us right now!
And now that I see how prepared for war the Rapid Conversion actually is, well I guess things will get interesting very soon hehehe.
On a Second note, Happy Christmas PyreElegy and Happy Christmas to everyone that reads this fanfiction!
... I am allowed to say this, ain't I?
I definately don't wan't any more trouble than I already managed to get.
Also, congratulations on your Notebook!
I can't wait for what the next chapter will bring!
Just one thing, I particularly believe we will still have war and that the unggoy already managed to send his message.
With my highest regards;
Ares out.
Axios!
12/24/2020 c22 Guest
WOO! Thanks for another amazing chapter.

I like how you handled the immense difficulty of language barriers. To many fics gloss over it, so I'm really glad to see you really take into account the inconveniences of communication. I'm also really glad to hear about your new laptop. Congratulation!

Once again, thank you for spending time sharing your creativity with us, and I hope see more of you in the future. Happy Christmas and a merry New Year.
12/24/2020 c22 S538
I love the world building you have been doing and I’m very excited to see what happens next.
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