8/11/2020 c1 RandomLLFanGuest
(Gasp) It could have been the actual ending... I mean, I was pretty unsatisfied with the original endings, you know. They never had the scar even though Five is supposed to be dead. PLus, it's not fair for John to have a chip in his head. Making him die is sad, but this kind of heroic final act should, and I mean SHOULD have been the real end of Return To Zero. You're a cool author and I think you should write more one-shots about Lorien Legaices. I so much love this fandom and I'm so happy to read this. Thanks for giving me such a great one-shot.
-Random LL fan guest-
(Gasp) It could have been the actual ending... I mean, I was pretty unsatisfied with the original endings, you know. They never had the scar even though Five is supposed to be dead. PLus, it's not fair for John to have a chip in his head. Making him die is sad, but this kind of heroic final act should, and I mean SHOULD have been the real end of Return To Zero. You're a cool author and I think you should write more one-shots about Lorien Legaices. I so much love this fandom and I'm so happy to read this. Thanks for giving me such a great one-shot.
-Random LL fan guest-
7/18/2020 c1 1FLYBOY2000
Really good! Very well written feels like it could have been the actual ending
Really good! Very well written feels like it could have been the actual ending