7/6/2020 c2 15Coconut of Doom
Well, I firmly see how you wish to write this story so I will say that your level of description is acceptable. You should experiment with writing longer and more detailed chapters though. People appreciate detailed scenes, gives them a better visual on what they read as well as the emotions each character is feeling.
Continue the good works.
Well, I firmly see how you wish to write this story so I will say that your level of description is acceptable. You should experiment with writing longer and more detailed chapters though. People appreciate detailed scenes, gives them a better visual on what they read as well as the emotions each character is feeling.
Continue the good works.
6/11/2020 c1 Coconut of Doom
I'll offer you a nugget of advice, as I can see some potential for this story. Try being more descriptive. What did Herah and her advisors talk about at the meeting? That's a good example of where you should be descriptive.
Continue the good works!
I'll offer you a nugget of advice, as I can see some potential for this story. Try being more descriptive. What did Herah and her advisors talk about at the meeting? That's a good example of where you should be descriptive.
Continue the good works!