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7/15/2020 c2 Guest
girl dw im new to writing too, I write on wattpad. Could you please do it with full stops and paragraphs? it would really help for us to read it :) ~slickpeach
6/4/2020 c1 Chel29
This was really good. Can I suggest something though? It was a little hard to read at first because it wasn’t spaced out enough. It was also hard to tell the beginning and ending of a sentence because there was no punctuation. I wasn’t sure if this was going to be just a one shot or if you were going to continue on with the story, but if so, next time just space out the sentences more and use more punctuation. Bedsides that, you captured Huey’s personality perfectly. Hope to see more from you.

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