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8/23/2020 c6 Guest
More please :3
8/22/2020 c6 Pjun
Very cool! I like the curel Joel, and Ellie know his curel side but never afraid of him
I like Joel talk about past, and he mentioned Tess...I really miss her
Killing Strangers is cool, I want to see them play and sing it
8/22/2020 c6 17DarylDixon'sLover
Great chapter
8/19/2020 c5 2Servo25
Loving your story! Can't wait to see what happens. Hope you update soon
8/10/2020 c5 Guest
I read your story in one sitting and it's already a lot more believable than the story they sold us in Part 2. If you are going to follow the pattern of the game with the same characters then I would love to see what you do with certain scenes. Looking forward to the next update.
8/8/2020 c5 DarkMaster1117
This is beautiful, plz continue your story
8/8/2020 c5 17DarylDixon'sLover
Great chapter
8/7/2020 c4 Guest
That can't be it. Please continue!
7/30/2020 c4 Graeskog
Pulls you in to a hug*
DUDE!

You have no idea how much I needed this. Yeah, the part 2 left me pretty much feeling miserable as all hell. Joel and Ellie working their stuff out and going to another adventure? Damn straight I’m in! Just what I needed to see after TLOU2. Ellie’s very much in character quick thinking and badassery saving Joel is another huge plus in my book. Shame about Tommy but I can’t say I’m too sorry about Abby (really not a fan). True it may’ve been premature to kill her off this soon, but I can see someone like Manny or Isaac filling the role of villain should you need one.

It’s nice to see how true you remain to the game. Snippets of life in Jackson and Ellie and Joel’s interactions feel on point. Writing is solid. Just right amount of internal thoughts and details, believable dialogue and not too edgy. Seriously, good job man. Some typos here and there but it doesn’t detract from the experience.

Salt Lake crew baking off… I won’t say it’s unbelievable. The 5 remaining ex-fireflies don’t stand much of change waging war against the entire settlement no matter how furious they may be. I could see them trying to rally another attack when they get to Seattle but it’s highly unlikely Isaac would budge on that with the Seraphite-Wolf going on. It would be nice to get a small peek on them, but I understand if you want to focus on Joel and Ellie in the style of (imho) much stronger narrative of the first game. Plus, it keeps everything on edge.

What I’m trying to say is that feel free to go wild with this, take some risks. You have a good story here and your writing and worldbuilding (via etc. Abe) feels organic. Keep up the good work!
7/30/2020 c4 Guest
Omg! Abraham Dixon! He's got to be related to Isaac. Maybe as father or elder brother? Nice touch making him a firefly. I'm really excited to see where this story is going to go for Joel and Ellie. Please don't kill Joel off, ok?
7/29/2020 c4 musicalkilljoy
Have I already told you how this is already much better than part 2? Cannot wait to see what will happen, it was interesting to witness that moment when Joel froze, I'm looking forward to see how his (and Ellie) characters will develop in your story. Just seeing them on an adventure together again give me all the feels I was hoping to find in part 2, saying I was disappointed isn't enough too express how they've destroyed all my expectations. Anyway, thank you for sharing! x
7/29/2020 c4 I'mWithTheScars
This is such a good story. I'm really happy you continued it and I'm really enjoying seeing Joel and Ellie's interactions. It's an interesting to see how they've adapted their relationship now that Ellie's an adult. So nice to see Joel (my boii) have his shot at Tommy's revenge arc, if that is where your going with this?
7/28/2020 c1 jokesonyou7799
Amazing story I hope u continue on and how long do u take to make each chapter?
7/28/2020 c4 2The Imitation Wizard
Super cool chapter! Loved it! Bravo!
7/28/2020 c4 17DarylDixon'sLover
Great chapter, I’m really enjoying it.
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