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6/14 c37 5NightAroma
Festivia got banned from the Bounce Lounge? Why am I not surprised?

Kinda feel bad for Tom, but he was being really suspicious there. Hope he can smooth things over with Amirana.

Now let's see how good Fergusson and Alfonzo are at keeping secrets... :P
6/13 c36 NightAroma
Tom? Da heck are you doing?

And who's this Amirana Butterfly person? Hmm...
5/5 c35 NightAroma
Well... that answers that question. It'll be interesting to see how this turns out with the rest of the group.

And... Dipper noticed the Blood Moon... Oh, that could get complicated...
Which is why I firmly believe Star and Marco should never get together until AFTER the curse is broken, like they did in the show. If they do it before that happens, then there's the question of 'are these feelings real?', and that almost never ends well for them as a couple without some major lore retcon. (Granted, the Blood Moon is interpreted differently by almost everyone, but still.) Kinda curious how you decide to handle this...
5/5 c34 NightAroma
I am not ashamed to say that I laughed very hard when Jeremy got what he deserved. Because he deserved it.

Oh, poor Marco. Everyone's pairing him with Star now. Speaking of which... I don't think we've seen Jackie yet either. Huh. Maybe the dance will go differently this time around...
5/1 c33 NightAroma
I'm starting to notice a trend: whenever Star dips down, things tend to go boom. Not complaining, just find it interesting.

Although, since this technically takes place during Season 2 of SVTFOE... when are we going to see Ludo show up?
5/1 c32 NightAroma
Correction: this is going to be satisfying for everyone. Except maybe Jeremy.

I have a feeling Star was wanting to spend more time with Marco. It would make sense, considering they haven't really hung out together much since this whole crossover mess started kicking up. And as the saying goes, absence makes the heart grow fonder... hehehe...
5/2 c33 3Jay Man1
Loving this story and I am glad to see so many new chapters. I like how you giving more clarification on Marco's skill level as the show seemed to forget or be inconsistent with where he stood.
4/30 c31 NightAroma
Huh, not familiar with this Gabe person, but I can tell he's dangerous. And reminds me a little of how capable Marco became after spending time in the Neverzone...
Speaking of which, if Trip does end up hiring Gabe, can we get "Running with Scissors" before Marco has to deal with him?
4/29 c30 NightAroma
I know I saw this coming a mile away, but... JEREMY, YOU PIECE OF TRASH, I WILL END YOU FOR THIS!

...wait a second. Nano trained Brantley in the first place, so why not have her train them?
4/28 c29 NightAroma
Huh, I was right. Something major did happen. A major smackdown, courtesy of Nano!

And Dipper has a point, Janna. Although that was one of the best comebacks I've ever heard, it was still... gross.

But what's with the snakes? And are they related to that Snake Head guy?
4/27 c28 NightAroma
Yeah, I understand not liking that bit of "Red Belt". The only real reason I liked it was the fact that it was a training montage (that and the gag of random things landing in Marco's eyes, that was hilarious). Kind of sad we miss out on Marco's nightmare, that was another part I really liked about that episode.

Anyways, I like how you depict Sensei Brantley. Seems a little more philosophical than in the show. Nice touch!

And why do I get the feeling something major happens at the scrapyard?
4/26 c27 NightAroma
Just because I can't help but make the reference: "Keep your sacrilege off my pizza!"
But seriously, pineapple on pizza isn't that bad. Not my favorite, but it's not that bad.
4/21 c24 NightAroma
Huh. Looks like Star is beginning to see Marco in a new light. And it looks like Marco isn't going to be as oblivious this time around. Interesting...

Ookaay, Dipper. Nooot sure you made the best decision there. I foresee some Jannanigans in the near future.
4/21 c23 NightAroma
Dipper, I strongly suggest you cure yourself of that bug. Marco may not realize his feelings for Star yet, but I don't think he would appreciate you going after her.
Not to mention you'd have to deal with Tom...
12/16/2020 c20 55Gundam Kaiser
I may have said this before, or perhaps it's strongly implied by my overall reviews to date.

But I think it's worth putting bluntly and plainly that I really like how you're developing the Beetle trio as characters.

Now, to actually set that aside for a moment, one of the precious few things better than a well-executed Big Damn Heroes moment, which you certainly delivered here... is one the characters can half-manage to plan out. It shows that Drew's starting to fight smartly, even if his actual fighting prowess in itself still leaves... basically everything to be desired.

It's also kind of interesting to see, as a continuation from the last chapter, that Jo's starting to get hit with the whole "get what I want but in a way I don't like" thing, and I'm actually really excited to see how she goes about handling that (or perhaps more likely, struggling to) as time goes on.
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