7/7/2020 c1 Colorado
This is a really good start! I love seeing the relationship here between Jim and Silver
You might want to edit this chapter, I'm not sure if it's just because I am reading on my phone but there is a lot of code formatting mixed up in here, if you could edit it in your doc manager and update it will be much easier to read!
Cant wait to read more, hope you enjoy your writing :)
This is a really good start! I love seeing the relationship here between Jim and Silver
You might want to edit this chapter, I'm not sure if it's just because I am reading on my phone but there is a lot of code formatting mixed up in here, if you could edit it in your doc manager and update it will be much easier to read!
Cant wait to read more, hope you enjoy your writing :)
7/7/2020 c1 Guest
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