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12/7/2020 c33 5Archergreatestsecretagent
This was interesting! I like how you worked the Titan thing into that initiative. I'm getting Judas Contract vibes already. Now the Batman story, I googled Minoans and I learned they were a civilization on Crete and Aegean islands. Going by that maybe immortal or very old BM enemies appearing. Maybe, Deacon Blackfire or Ra's returning, or Hush and Barbatos? I'm thinking Riddler though, just because you use the animated series as a template and Riddler created a video game using the minotaur. Anyway, can't wait for the next story, great work!
11/1/2020 c33 GreeKnight
First off, I like how Bart takes offense at not being recognized by his teammates. I find this the most in-character thing for him to do despite his typical happy-go-lucky attitude.

Good ending, I expected the team to get together officially by the end of the story and Terra is a nice teaser for the next installment. I do hope that you either steer away from the Judas Contract storyline(because it's been done so many times) or if you go that route I hope you make an interesting plot change.

Thanks for the incredible ride! Cheers
11/1/2020 c33 Eris
Awesome story ending. Very touching and exciting. The end is so surprising. Really hope that we find out more about Beast Boy’s past. I would love to see Bumble Bee, Hotspot, Más and Menos, Hotspot and members of the Doom Patrol (Elasti-Girl, Mento, Negative-Man, Negative-Women, Robotman, the Chief, Crazy Jane, Danny the Street, Casey Brinkle, Dorothy Spinner, Holly Dayton, ...). Please write a new (Teen Titans) story soon again.

P.S.: Could you maybe create a map about where the different characters (Beast Boy, Starfire, Cyborg, ...) appear in your stories (like character “X” appears in story “Y, chapter 8 & 9” and story “Z”, ...)? I’m still searching through all your many stories which are very much for clues about Beast Boy and some other characters. Would be helpful.
10/30/2020 c33 Stocktonbat
Can't wait for the next story, also thanks for the shout out
10/30/2020 c33 38ShadowMajin
Wasn't expecting Terra to pop up like she did? Is she joining the initiative? Or is this all a rouse? So many choices.

I was hoping to see Tim and Cassie talk, though it appears not to be. They're definitely building some chemistry here.

Now we get to see just how serious these teens are. Will they be Justice League Lite? Will they be able not to kill each other? Will they survive Starfire's training?! Got to wait on that it would seem.
10/28/2020 c32 Eris
Awesome chapter. Very intriguing and fascinating. Will the team now hopeful find a better place to stay? Will Beast Boy someday get his memories of his past back? Will Kid Flash come to terms with everything? Hope you update soon again.
10/26/2020 c32 ShadowMajin
You weren't kidding about this being long. I'm guessing the next chapter is the last one.

The Speed Force was rather interesting. I picked out Wonder Woman fighting a hydra and a Night of Ice reference. Darkseid definitely, a possible hint at something to come, perhaps?

Nice slight of hand by Impulse. It was a blink and you missed it instance.

I wonder if Mallah finds his friend. I have a feeling it's not over for those two.
10/26/2020 c32 Stocktonbat
Another amazing story about to come to an end, can't wait to see what you write next
10/20/2020 c31 GreeKnight
Great fighting scenes as always. I like how Wonder Girl thinks back on Batman's threat.

I wonder what Thad is up to...
10/20/2020 c31 Eris
Awesome. Very dramatic and intense fighting scenes. The end is dark. Wonder who will survive the fire. Hope you update soon again.
10/19/2020 c31 ShadowMajin
You're missing a scene break between Wonder Girl and the bad guy.

Just one after the other, the HIVE 5 have been going down. I guess the Titans can pull out a win when it counts. Either that, or Jynx's bad luck catches up with her, eh, eh?

That bomb Thawn has though, I'm guessing that's going to be the climax here.
10/19/2020 c30 Eris
Fascinating chapter. The different fighting scenes are very intriguing. The description of the connection between Brain and Mallah is also so exciting. Wonder how Beast Boy did during the fights? Hope you update soon again.
10/18/2020 c30 GreeKnight
Excellent job wrapping up these other fights, excited to see how it all ends!
10/17/2020 c30 ShadowMajin
"...but not fast enough to prevent the buckle from tearing into her food." I believe you mean hood, not food.

Damn, Starfire did not hold back. And she used her starbolts in a very interesting way too. I rather liked that fight.

And Red Robin finally beat someone! Someone has been learning.
10/16/2020 c30 Stocktonbat
Wow more from savage raven also I was looking forward to impulse kicking Thad in the balls
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