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12/31/2020 c5 Guest
You write wonderfully!
12/23/2020 c5 27Lauryn Vi
This entire story was truly a delight. It’s been a rough week or sorts and this story has just completely lifted my spirits.

You write put-out Georg so well - perfect snark and understated humour. LOVED the “ when you were free to lament your poor life decisions in private and everyone was too scared to impose” and the bit about bumping into Max in the wine cellar. Loved the bit when G was playing ball with the children, and wakes up to find Maria leaning over him (so casually intimate...) and this chapter! I just about swooned at all the ways he imagined himself kissing her.

Thank you for this lovely story!
12/23/2020 c2 Lauryn Vi
I’m just getting a chance to catch up all these wonderful stories I’ve missed over the last while. And I LOVE THIS. I love getting into Georg’s head (“you hate the fact that you might have scared her away in the middle of the night” - I didn’t know I’ve been waiting for this admission all my life!), love how “unnecessary” Elsa is, love the little missing scenes we get to see (the two of them in his study and he’s pouring her a drink without realizing it...), love the fresh, snappy writing. Can’t wait to keep reading!
10/28/2020 c5 Guest
Great story. I always love nuance.
10/28/2020 c2 Guest
You have "nailed" the Captain's humor. Its very subtle but you get it. "Even fibbers need feeding,..." That made me LOL. Very similar to that drop of the whistle as he's leaving the children in the scene where they introduce themselves to Maria. Blink and you miss it. :-)
10/28/2020 c5 Guest
Thanks for such a lovely end to this story. Love these introspective pieces!
10/22/2020 c5 Kate
Fantastic! From all the first kiss fantasies to asking if nuns accept flowers, I was enraptured! Write more please!
10/20/2020 c5 7ForHereYouAre
Absolutely adorable! Love this in depth take!
10/15/2020 c5 8MsHope
Ahhhh I really love this, I swear! It's just as lovely and vivid as always, but this one feels extra special. You did such a wonderful job, believe me, I can't even sum up what I feel for this anymore! It's too beautiful! Also, I really, really can't wait to read anything else you write! Will be keeping a lookout :)
10/15/2020 c5 33augiesannie
I loved this - for the experience of watching my favorite scene in my favorite film but with an extra track letting me read G’s mind. And the retelling of his fantasies about kissing Maria was awesome! Looking forward to more from you.
10/3/2020 c4 33naybaybay
Gosh I really love this. The line about what makes a nun use the words "God-forsaken" made me laugh. You are such a talented writer!
9/28/2020 c4 Guest
i love the way this is written! it's so cool seeing a fanfic where not only is it from georg's perspective, but it's like you ARE georg! we need another chapter!
8/31/2020 c4 329TvG
Another lovely update!
It broke my heart how at first he was making excuses to avoid their excursion because he thought he was going to ruin their day. Poor Georg...and also poor Maria!

I love the feeling of being inside Georg's mind when I read your story. Your writing style is exquisite. I will be sad when you finish this story, but I also can't wait to read the last chapter.
8/29/2020 c4 2devilishmisfit
Fine! Here’s your review now where’s my chapter!

Seriously, love the inner thoughts! Very realistic to what might have been occurring in their heads!
8/27/2020 c1 Guest
I've just discovered this story and it is amazing! I really love your writing style, so many feels reading this story! Can't wait for the next update.
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